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FireScythe
May 27th, 2008, 09:55 PM
Hey, I've had the urge to jump out of my lurking hole and give you something to look at, so heres my portfolio website I've been working on :). Although it's a constant WIP I consider it complete for now.

www.thefieryscythe.co.uk (http://www.thefieryscythe.co.uk)

http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/407/websitelt9.th.jpg (http://img228.imageshack.us/my.php?image=websitelt9.jpg)http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/5643/website2zl0.th.jpg (http://img228.imageshack.us/my.php?image=website2zl0.jpg)

Zeph
May 27th, 2008, 11:04 PM
Not to big of a fan on some of the design and color scheme, but it works and has content, so I cant say much else against it. The video works best and the only problem I saw with it was one fly-through in an unreal level. Open up some cinema tutorials and learn how to do the same thing and make the camera path smooth. Also, I would take some of your stills and give them more of a dynamic lighting. For starters, flip the background image of the blue-white dither 180 so the dark part is on the bottom. The visual weight there is really thrown off with the light color on the bottom. On those same images, see if you can re-render the scene with revised lighting so the objects have self shadowing.


Well, as you're here, you probably want some contact details. So here you go:
Cut that and push the contact button to the far right.

ICEE
May 27th, 2008, 11:31 PM
http://www.thefieryscythe.co.uk/images/gallery/2.jpg
Rather like this one

FireScythe
May 28th, 2008, 12:31 PM
Thanks Zeph, I'll give what you said a go.

killer9856
May 28th, 2008, 04:53 PM
I liked the end of the video =]

Good stuff

DaneO'Roo
May 28th, 2008, 05:01 PM
You really need to keep working on your art as a whole. It's good that you have a site though, I'm still in the process of making mine right now. Mainly your texturing is what needs massive improvement. Your modeling seems fine though.

Limited
May 28th, 2008, 05:40 PM
Theres a BTECH in Games Dev? Damnit....

Not a massive fan of the website, could try to make it flow a bit more.

Nice warrior model by the way.

FireScythe
May 29th, 2008, 05:44 AM
You really need to keep working on your art as a whole. It's good that you have a site though, I'm still in the process of making mine right now. Mainly your texturing is what needs massive improvement. Your modeling seems fine though.
Yeah, texturing not my strong point, but I am working on it.

Theres a BTECH in Games Dev? Damnit....
Don't do it!! It was crap. 10% learning what you want to learn, 90% being force fed rubbish you don't want to know.

Snowy
May 29th, 2008, 07:53 AM
I can't say I like the design of the website... but the modeling stuff is better then mine :P