View Full Version : The Signals Episode one

August 21st, 2008, 01:45 AM
I decided to not go on w. this series. I just did not like it, but whatever, why not show it.

Facts I am aware of

-Voice sounds buzzy (I had a bad mic)
-You can hear the faint "Slayer" in the beginning, which I missed.


August 21st, 2008, 02:24 PM
I actually enjoyed it. Extremely good concept in my opinion.

I would like to see it continued actually.

August 21st, 2008, 04:26 PM
I liked the video editing.

August 21st, 2008, 06:51 PM
I also enjoyed it, looks like it would have been entertaining to watch as the first episode was.

Carry it on.

August 24th, 2008, 09:01 PM
I enjoyed this, though, like your other video, some work could be used with the vocabulary. Read what I said in the other thread for more detail, but try to avoid saying stuff like "away from here" and "basically". They make it sound less professional. For "2 miles away from here", you could have said "2 miles away", and it would have sounded better, and you could have removed "basically" completely. Besides those two, it was great.

I loved the concept for the story line, and the effects were great. I'd really love to see this series continued, keep up the great work.