Should've had it focus on the bird at least D: I can imagine it would look nice, but a real thing would be cool.
There are some things to work on. Some of the angles you chose are...odd, like the phones. Perhaps you could try getting a shot of the phone taking up the entire frame.
I'll let Reaper take you on, so I don't sound like a total jackwad.
The rocket hummer was cool though =D
There isn't much in your scene other than the subjects. The glass, for example, is on a bland background of faded blue carpet. Same thing with the phone pictures for the most part, although on the one with the ocean in the background it got a lot more interesting.
The seagull looks very blurry, nothing is well defined, and so, in the end, it looks like somebody applied the "fresco" filter in Photoshop.
I like the first and second pictures because they have details in them on the subject and around the subject giving some context to the situation.
My two cents.
Syuu: Yeah, I actually almost got hit by a car when I was taking that, so I had to move out of the way before I could focus, I just snapped it. good crit though, you don't sound like a jackwad.
Metkiller: good crit, thanks. Yeah, those are my two favorites too, for the reasons you said.
Advance: its just one of those fireworks that move across the ground, I got a shot of it right when it was going off.
Aaaaannnd we're back.
Was just out in my yard, saw a couple of things:
Not really much improvement over last time, this was me just walking around in my front yard, nothing serious.
also updated first post.
Last edited by Corndogman; September 10th, 2009 at 05:58 PM.
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