Quick-Crit 2010

You're going to have some smoothing errors with your current edge flow. I'd also add another layer of edge loop on your cylinder cap, but that's more of a personal preference, it makes it more flat with a sharp edge instead of this weirdly light-ish ring around the edge. Don't be afraid to make the detail floating geo if it messes the smoothing to the point where working a way around is well, too much work.

Also get some high res ref, from looking at your details, you're using a low res ref that doesn't show alot of the details well.

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Originally Posted by kid908

You're going to have some smoothing errors with your current edge flow.

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I see a few of them. They're pretty unnoticeable, but surely they can be fixed. Would you (or someone) mind showing me how you would approach some of the sections that are bad/ugly?

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I'd also add another layer of edge loop on your cylinder cap, but that's more of a personal preference, it makes it more flat with a sharp edge instead of this weirdly light-ish ring around the edge.

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Wow, that actually does make a difference. I'll keep this in mind next time.

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Also get some high res ref, from looking at your details, you're using a low res ref that doesn't show alot of the details well.

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Lol, the model is an attempt at the DMR from Halo: Reach. It seemed like a simple enough model to really familiarize myself with sub-dividing objects. The references/renders I have are, at max, 1920 x 1080. That seems a bit large for such blatantly absent details, so I believe it's on my behalf why the model is boring.

Here's a DRM i partially did a while back. some of the edges are a bit tight, but I think i got the down.



dl:http://www.megaupload.com/?d=RC8NRGLG

I really appreciate that, thanks a lot.

continuing my trend of very furry pictures



here's another

Look like pokemon for white and black.

100% from scratch...no c/p like other nubs...real calculations...might not seem like art but there is a lot of work involved (at least in this one)
I won't post the features (doh) but they have never been in a previous AimBot (you can see them in the video partially though).



oh and of course not released :allears:

I've always wondered if you could use some probability functions to predict movement better when they're strafing. Sometimes you just know they're gonna move back the other way and so you place your shot differently. If you're bored you could look into that.

When strafing this AimBot hits unless the player strafes very fast. Since most players have the same strafing interval it should be possible to make an algorithm for that. Though when strafing, this bots hits 90% of the time headshot.

http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s...27ljsi29-2.jpg

http://s148.photobucket.com/albums/s...xturesheet.jpghttp://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s...xturesheet.jpg

Im learning on making normals and AO's in MAX, so I did this teeny weeny thingy. I noticed some bad parts, so I am fixing them. Also, should I put dents in the normal map for metal surfaces?

Not an expert at this but it looks like your panel was hit by photons. Those scratches sure are straight.

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Originally Posted by CrAsHOvErRide

Not an expert at this but it looks like your panel was hit by photons. Those scratches sure are straight.

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A staff member with OCD is running through the complex with a razor and a straightedge.

it's a start.

you're not done though, needs more dust, wear, showing of paint-layers (can be dont in normalmap) and a few bumps and dents would do alot of good too.

in my opinion, it's a bit of a flat thing, and not a very interesting design, but considering it's texture practice, i guess it's fine.

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Originally Posted by CrAsHOvErRide

100% from scratch...no c/p like other nubs...real calculations...might not seem like art but there is a lot of work involved (at least in this one)
I won't post the features (doh) but they have never been in a previous AimBot (you can see them in the video partially though).



oh and of course not released :allears:

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STOP RUINING THE GAME YOU FUCKING FAGGOT GOD FUCKSYOU PATRICK SJ 6 YOU AIMBOTYTER HACKER ETC ETC

pft, patty's a white hat :allears:

:allears:

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Originally Posted by CrAsHOvErRide

100% from scratch...no c/p like other nubs...real calculations...might not seem like art but there is a lot of work involved (at least in this one)
I won't post the features (doh) but they have never been in a previous AimBot (you can see them in the video partially though).



oh and of course not released :allears:

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control your snap holy shit

http://sonicxtails4ever.deviantart.com/#/d2wg2zc

my latest drawing, I'm getting good at this !

are you?

yes, stop fursecuting me

:) but its so fun and gratifying!

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http://sonicxtails4ever.deviantart.com/#/d2wg2zc

my latest drawing, I'm getting good at this !

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http://timo.modacity.net/yu4brf4s.gif

Another prop for one of my mapping buddies.

It looks too clean and plain. Work on adding some smaller surface details and textures and more materials & colours.

Looks hella simple.

Not enough sides for TF2. Texture doesn't appear to tile properly as well.

more better lighthouse

http://commondatastorage.googleapis....al/2983461.jpg

called angel's gate lighthouse. just base yours off of that and make the black details the team colors. Having been boating for years, I'll tell you that your lighthouse shape just doesn't cut it.

Just a little side project. A turbofan jet engine. The tan is a temp area.

Cutaway render:


Main Ref:

http://www.iaenews.com/images/galler...00_cutaway.jpg

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Originally Posted by Con

It looks too clean and plain. Work on adding some smaller surface details and textures and more materials & colours.

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This isn't going to be anywhere near the player, so small details really aren't necessary, or worth it.

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Originally Posted by Cagerrin

Not enough sides for TF2.

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This isn't serious right?

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Originally Posted by Malloy

Looks hella simple.

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Nice deduction

Drew tails again.

http://sonicxtails4ever.deviantart.com/#/d2wm073

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Originally Posted by SnaFuBAR

more better lighthouse

http://commondatastorage.googleapis....al/2983461.jpg

called angel's gate lighthouse. just base yours off of that and make the black details the team colors. Having been boating for years, I'll tell you that your lighthouse shape just doesn't cut it.

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That lighthouse looks kinda silly to me :S

also

It's just that all the detail at the top is white and it doesn't look like you even textured it there. Maybe some brass or something for the railing would look good.

That engine looks awesome btw, kid. Keep it up. Are you planning on texturing it?

http://imgur.com/ml2Ez.png

look what i found and worked on for a bit!

http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/t...ff/leglol3.jpg
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/t...ff/leglol2.jpg
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/t...f/leglol-1.jpg

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[thumb]http://imgur.com/ijWDf.png[/thumb]

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When I was scrolling down I was really hoping to see a kitten under his foot.

Still neat though sir.

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Originally Posted by neuro

look what i found and worked on for a bit!

[thumb]http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt312/Neurologicaldisorder/stuff/leglol3.jpg[/thumb]
[thumb]http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt312/Neurologicaldisorder/stuff/leglol2.jpg[/thumb]
[thumb]http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt312/Neurologicaldisorder/stuff/leglol-1.jpg[/thumb]

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The hip joint bothers me a bit. Unlike most everything else, it doesn't seem to have a mechanism operating it, and if it does, that mechanism is cramped into a very small area, an area that doesn't quite look like it could support the body.

(what I'm trying to say is that the hip joint could use various pistons, levers, tubes, and wires within the leg socket's radius.)

ye i know what you mean, i've been doing that joint for ages now, and i'm calling it fine for now, maybe i'll change it around when i get more of the body done if it doesnt ft in etc.

I was bored and threw a few scene together with ripped content. I have to say, the tris count on these models really surprised me. I'm wanting to make one with Tychus and Raynor, but I'm having trouble finding the Tychus model.


Dark lighting really brings out starships. I've never really been accustomed to seeing well lite starships. Sorry about the bloomlike effect. was trying to get a focus blur, but I kinda like the rim lighting of the ships.


(if you're wondering what's the machine, it's a siege tank in siege mode)

Starships are GAME models for the actual game.

Nova and the Siege Tank are models that appear on the Hyperion and in real time cutscenes.

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Originally Posted by Llama Juice

When I was scrolling down I was really hoping to see a kitten under his foot.

Still neat though sir.

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What, zergling not good enough for ya mister?

Kid: No, it really doesn't. It obscures them horrendously. Brighten that shit up! I can't even tell what's going on. It took me a good five seconds to find out that it was a picture of a fleet of void rays and... a mothership? I don't even know.

I play Protoss alot and I kinda gave up on zerg after I found out Karrigan wasn't in any of the real time cinematics. I have some zergs that I was saving to throw into the Tychus/Raynor scene if I can find Tychus.

Are you talking about the Blur as well?

It doesn't look so much blurred as it does just really dark. Everything's in shadow and it's really hard to make out what's what.

I drew more furry pictures.

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Originally Posted by Sel

I drew more furry pictures.

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What's with you, the furries, and the trains? Are you planning a cross country trainride while having tea with furries?

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What's with you, the furries, and the trains? Are you planning a cross country trainride while having tea with furries?

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More or less, here have more furry drawings.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3332789/Art/S%26T_clean.jpg

http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z...g?t=1282339343

I drew a picture too.

got the main focus down. Time to fill in the space, is there something wrong with the posing and how can I improve it.

the blue guy on the right is leaning very awkwardly. you can fix this by pulling his right leg back some, and still maintaining the body language's expression of recoil

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I drew a picture too.

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Well that made me lol and I'm not even sure why.

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http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z...g?t=1282339343

I drew a picture too.

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incredible

http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/i/20..._Von_Krupp.jpg

Any pointers on anything would be awesome.

That is terribadble

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http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/i/20..._Von_Krupp.jpg

Any pointers on anything would be awesome.

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Shoulders and overall torso is waaayyy too skinny.

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fuck. It happened.

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fuck yeah

oh god sel since you came out of the closet it has just gone down hill. its nice that youve found an artistic outlet, but furry porn is going a bit far

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Seriously, neuro? Seriously? ~p0lar

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i don't see anything wrong with it.

Seen far better furry art, this is kinda sad in all honesty.

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Seen far better furry art, this is kinda sad in all honesty.

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Not surprising, since that was day 13 of my starting drawing !

The only gripe I have with it is that you cannot see the nipples. Add nipples and make sure they're pronounced.

Oh dear god

Shot tags, great drawing, just bad that I know what its for :O

hey cute girl fox

Hey you should make a gallery thread for all these :)

sel opening the closet door has had a domino effect on this community. :gonk::gonk:

Uh, what closet door?

It's not like I've ever been particularly secretive about this :S

You're an ironic furry you know that.

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Originally Posted by Sel

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heres my professional fact

nice image violation

Sel whats gotten into you? Your drawings lack tits

and proportions

And interest.

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Sel whats gotten into you? Your drawings lack tits

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Well you see, I'm gay !

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and proportions

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Working on it, some friends showed me some interesting posing exercises to work on those !

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And interest.

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You're such a dick heathen !

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http://i470.photobucket.com/albums/r...2112514671.jpg

http://i470.photobucket.com/albums/r...5061063545.jpg

http://i470.photobucket.com/albums/r...5388200315.jpg

http://i470.photobucket.com/albums/r...5388200315.jpg

http://i470.photobucket.com/albums/r...5987624807.jpg

http://i470.photobucket.com/albums/r...d_and_eyes.jpg

http://i470.photobucket.com/albums/r...male_bodys.jpg

http://i470.photobucket.com/albums/r...auen_krper.jpg

http://i470.photobucket.com/albums/r...nstrutcion.jpg

excellent, thanks.

http://i724.photobucket.com/albums/w...ndosArmor2.jpg

Its a Bandos God Chestplate from Runescape. I really liked the design of it, but hated how horrible of a model they had, considering its Runescape after all. So I decided to see if I could do it after over a year of not touching 3ds max. Not really doing anything with it, just kinda for practice.

http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__...lbandos_aa.png

Thats my reference. I kinda changed a few things as you can see.

Maybe we all need to re live our childhood and start a Modacity clan in Runescape.

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Maybe we all need to re live our childhood and start a Modacity clan in Runescape.

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Guild Wars is better, and cheaper in the long run?

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Guild Wars is better, and cheaper in the long run?

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who told you that? guild wars is terrible. Looks pretty cool Geo. Wouldn't it be something to do a high res Runescape mod?

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who told you that? guild wars is terrible. Looks pretty cool Geo. Wouldn't it be something to do a high res Runescape mod?

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Having played both Guild Wars and Runescape, I'm fairly sure I don't need to be "told" which is better. Guild Wars is the only MMO I've played that I don't hate.

Played Guild Wars for 5 years and then I wrote bots and ban. ^^ [/offtopic]

what I liked about runescape was that it had an actual free market economy. Granted it wasn't a good simulation of real life because you didn't flat out need the items for survival, (despite some people acting like they did), but it was a lot of fun devising ways to make money. (I settled on selling weed)

awwwr

day 16

Can we ban Sel for a while? Just long enough for him to get this out of his system.

I agree with the post above.
This is why I really dont bother to post here.
Someone posts something dumb.
Another supports.
And from there it becomes a meme.
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Yeah, look, I don't have a problem with furries themselves, but it gets to be upsetting when I'm subjected to explicit (or implicit, I suppose) images over and over. There's a difference between being artistically expressive and drawing something that turns you on and sharing it with people who don't feel the same way. I'm trying to be tolerant, but I'd be annoyed if somebody kept drawing anime in suggestive heterosexual poses too. The point is, I don't give a fuck what your private life is like, but it's private for a reason, furry or not.

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Can we ban Sel for a while? Just long enough for him to get this out of his system.

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Yeah, no.

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I agree with the post above.
This is why I really dont bother to post here.
Someone posts something dumb.
Another supports.
And from there it becomes a meme.
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If you really don't like what I want to draw then you can fucking deal with it :S

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Yeah, no.



If you really don't like what I want to draw then you can fucking deal with it :S

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uhm, just because I draw 2 stick figures doing it, doesn't mean I make multiple positions and post them in the forums for others to see. You got to be ....ed up to think like that. Honestly, grow up. Goto a furry porn site and post there.

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Yeah, look, I don't have a problem with furries themselves, but it gets to be upsetting when I'm subjected to explicit (or implicit, I suppose) images over and over. There's a difference between being artistically expressive and drawing something that turns you on and sharing it with people who don't feel the same way. I'm trying to be tolerant, but I'd be annoyed if somebody kept drawing anime in suggestive heterosexual poses too. The point is, I don't give a fuck what your private life is like, but it's private for a reason, furry or not.

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This. I don't care if you like furries sel, but just no dude, what you're doing can be like left in your private hdd. This is what ruined deviantart.

mini rant unrelated mostly:

how the hell is taking a picture and making a demot. out of it considered art? when is taking unfocused pictures of yourself is really not that attractive poses with a point and shoot camera art? No, I'm not saying all point and shoot camera photos are not art, I'm saying myspace picture is not art. There is a technique to taking GOOD pictures with point and shoot cams. I can tolerate those weird ass fan fiction since you're actually using your imagination to write the story and/or draw it out with actual technique and not instant repulsion.

What I'm saying is, if it's borderline soft-core, put it in spoiler or leave a link with warning. I'm sure there's people who check this thread during school or work and frankly, this is kind of NSFW.

to make it clear:
disclaimer: All images are taken from deviantart. I do not claim them as mine or own the rights to them.

art:

Here's one you can relate to....

Not art:

Funny but NOT ART:



Not funny and NOT ART:

I thought he was just trying to be funny by emphasizing the characteristics of a common furfag.
But yea, ban Sel 2010.

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uhm, just because I draw 2 stick figures doing it, doesn't mean I make multiple positions and post them in the forums for others to see. You got to be ....ed up to think like that. Honestly, grow up. Goto a furry porn site and post there.

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HUGGING IS TERRIFYING I KNOW MAN

Or just do what I did and ignore him.

So a friend of mine is making a collection of short stories he and some other people have written, and he wanted me to write a sort of action short story for it. I decided to begin it at the Climax (one of those "we'll show you the climax first, then have a flashback, then the climax again, then the ending" kind of things). This is what I have so far:

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Blood. That's all I could smell. Blood. Who's though? Did it belong to the person in front of me? No. He didn't even have a scratch. He was winning. That could only leave one person. Me. Just sitting here, barely able to not pass out after the beating I have just endured. The person standing in front of me just stared at me. He knew the same thing I did. I can't win this. I have lost. He held his sword out, a personal item that he seemed to use as if it was part of his body.

He took one step towards me, I flinched at the thought of what was going to happen in several seconds. He took another step, closing the honestly short gap between us by a pretty serious chunk. I was honestly hoping he would take shorter steps. Maybe that would make my life just a little longer. At this point I thought to myself that I could measure my remaining lifespan in seconds.

He took a third step, halfway there. I tried crawling back, but I slipped in the pool of my blood that was collecting before me. It wouldn't make any difference though, I was against a wall. He had me cornered. I thought cornered creatures were supposed to be able to fight beyond their limit. I felt no such feeling. I felt myself get weaker as the blood drained from my body. Fourth step. I didn't believe in a god. Maybe that was my issue. Maybe this was his or her way of smiting me for disbelief. I started to pray. Fifth step. Please, I know a miracle is out of the question at this point. I know I'm going to die, but please God, if you are going to take away my ability to do so, please protect my friends with your abilities. Let them live their lives without me being there to help them.

Sixth step. His foot was in the pool of my blood. He looked at me and lifted his sword. This was it. He knew it, I knew it. This is what it had come to. I had thought that I was strong enough to do anything. Damn, this must be the world's way of teaching those who think they are invincible a lesson. I felt like the Titanic, and this man in front of me was the iceberg that decided to sink me.

Wow, what am I thinking. You probably have no idea what I'm talking about. I probably sound like some crazy person babbling on about some imaginary event. Maybe it would be best if I started at the beginning. Back to May 3rd...

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I think the last paragraph could be worded better, but I have no idea how.

you're all very helpful in giving me feedback on my drawing, thank you.

But seriously thank you jpeg, you've been the most useful person in this thread !

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But seriously thank you jpeg, you've been the most useful person in this thread !

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than +rep me MAGGOT

How about you use a gallery thread?..I'm pretty sure this was suggested before, because this kind of shit is not "Quick Crit" material; you keep posting picture upon picture of the same damn thing in different poses. There's nothing to say, other than how absolutely disgusted I am to even step foot into this thread anymore.

Edit: Hey look! It seems you already have a gallery thread for yourself! Put it to good use kthxbai..

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than +rep me MAGGOT

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ok

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How about you use a gallery thread?..I'm pretty sure this was suggested before, because this kind of shit is not "Quick Crit" material; you keep posting picture upon picture of the same damn thing in different poses. There's nothing to say, other than how absolutely disgusted I am to even step foot into this thread anymore.

Edit: Hey look! It seems you already have a gallery thread for yourself! Put it to good use kthxbai..

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Hey odx guess what, posing is a big part of drawing, so are proportions. You may not have known this, since you're 12, and retarded, but hopefully my post here will bring you some enlightenment in the matter.

I'm posting in this thread because I want feedback (see jpeg's post for a good reference of what everyone should be doing :> ), if I was good at drawing, then maybe I would want to use my gallery thread to show off (If you looked at mine, you'd notice there's no feedback at all !). Quite frankly if you're unwilling to be helpful and actually point out what I need to work on in my drawings, and would rather cry about them being furry instead, you and everyone else whining shouldn't be in this thread.

Anyway if furry art disgusts you that much odx, I suggest you never set foot in this thread for the foreseeable future :)

[thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3332789/Art/S%26T3.jpg[/thumb]

The one on bottom has a much longer right leg than it does the left.

You're right, thanks for catching that.

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~*story*~

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You seem to have a tendency to use some pretty awkward expressions. For example...

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Me. Just sitting here, barely able to not pass out after the beating I have just endured

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The line "...barely able to not pass out after the beating..." makes sense, but it isn't worded very well - "...barely conscious after the beating..." is more succinct, and sounds a lot nicer. Also, "...I have just endured" doesn't make sense. The word "have" ought to be replaced with the word "had" so the tense remains the same. In addition to this, "here" should actually be "there", as the first few lines of your story indicate that it is written in past tense.

The tense wavers a lot throughout your story. You need to pick one (I'd suggest past tense, it seems to make things a bit less awkward) and stick with it.

You've made a good start though, so stick with it :-3

PS. Sel, your drawings look really nice!

I love how I post a render of something for opinions, and we end up with a page and a half of arguments over disturbing furry images haha