Ok, I get it now, I'll post some pics. I have to fix up a lot of the bad faces :embarrassed:
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Ok, I get it now, I'll post some pics. I have to fix up a lot of the bad faces :embarrassed:
http://i203.photobucket.com/albums/a...missilepod.jpg
Missile Pod. My first Plane Model. Still working on the top part of the thing, though, where the triangle is. Rest is done.
Oh, I certainly hope not.
http://images.wikia.com/halo/images/...od_angle_2.jpg
Thats not plane modelling, yet again an extruded and bevelled cylinder. Seriously Jay, learn to model! :fail:Quote:
Originally Posted by Jay2645
Please note it is a WIP.
Also, new pic:
http://i203.photobucket.com/albums/a...issilepod1.jpg
Nope, it's a plane model. Barrel part isn't, but the main frame is. I'm still watching the tutorial and taking it slow.
NONE of it is done.
Look at the references.
hardly representative of the missile pod. and if you plane modeled that, you wasted a lot of time. i don't believe it's plane modeled.. probably started with a cylinder, sectioned, extruded, scaled and chamfered...
Yeah, more likely then not, I did waste a lot of time. I'll have to redo it, maybe this time I should use better references.
you think so? :downs:
Maybe you should. If it wasn't because You said it was the missile pod, I would have thought it was some kinda fancy whipped creme dispenser.
I never saw how the missile pod had a practical barrel. Hell just the design doesn't look practical at all.
At least it's better then me stealing models, right?
I don't see the practicalities of the design either, but what Bungie wants, Bungie gets.
WIP You say? Ok...
Door ways and hallways look great. The main room in the middle is too plain, however.
The middle room lacks detail.
Yea thus why its called a WIP...LOL.
Lots more to do thats basically 1/6th of the map...so yea... lots more to see when i 'add detail' mwhahaa.
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/2...bound27sh5.jpg
Snowbound, and, if FD and Nic didn't get me addicted to EvE, it'd be finished and in map form by now -_-
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Originally Posted by Jayden
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Working on it a bit more, got rid of a lot of the face errors. Still have a ton of detail to add.
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/9...rework2tr6.png
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/5...defortjsu5.png
Looks much better now bob. I like the little ridges where the plasma energy comes out. :)
Also,
.png may hurt you
Added some textures to the model, fixed some of the boxyness.
Some things I have to do:
- Fix some UV's
- Fix that back end a bit
- Fatten up the wings
- Make the texture for the bottom of tail.
- Fix the wing texture to make it look more "realistic"
- I got the wrong shade of blue :gonk:
- Try to get the real logo. The one I made looks crappy compared to the original logo, and I have tried to google the damn thing but never seem to find it.
- Find out how to spin the propeller in a certain axis. The propeller's odd angle makes it difficult to make the starting animation without it wobbling.
- Now that I notice, the tip of the bronco looks a bit square, maybe I should round it up.
- Maybe perhaps new propellers. Hmmm.
- Oh yea, It needs wheels.
- And get it in-game. Last attempt ended up in :fail:
- Thats about all I can spot from this image. >.>
damn thats hot omega :)
Holy fucking shit dude, long time no see! I haven't seen you in like....ever. Sweet model btw, it's much better than the last thing I've seen you make. :DQuote:
Originally Posted by Jayden
Being doing a little bit of work on my WIP:
Nice work Firechap04 :)
Nice. It looks half forerunner, half... not, though. Which is absolutely fine. Keep it up.
Yea, just wait and see what i have planned for the rest of the map.
Forerunner stuff doesnt ever look 100% forerunner to me untill the textures are on it...but im taking a new swing on forerunner tech in this map :p
Looks great FD :)
EvE= EPIC failQuote:
Originally Posted by Jayden
I like it a lot hope its gonna be bigger though. ;)Quote:
Originally Posted by FireDragon04
As Dr. Phil would say..Quote:
Originally Posted by Massacre
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o...dPL/DRPHIL.jpg
Screenshot of a forerunner structure with a ripple filter applied to it?
The text makes the whole thing fail. :eyesroll:
Ross has always failed at text, which is why he asks me to do it sometimes. :downs:Quote:
Originally Posted by Patrickssj6
Id gladly offer my text services too. :downs:
True but I'm not one for chaos either.Quote:
Originally Posted by SilentWindPL
PK gpmg nearly done 3490 triangles so far, optimizing to be done.
http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/9555/pk1yu2.jpg
yes, with internals
http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/3863/pk2us6.jpg
:awesome: as allways
i dunno what it is, but the design is stupid <3 :awesome:
Man that thing looks so stupid without the stock. :awesome:
I took my first pot-shot at plane modeling today. This took me about 4 hours. It's terrible, I know but I just was bored.
This is all plane modeled except the scope.
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1313/...747ae219da.jpg
SRS99D S2 AM Sniper Rifle
And here's my first non-failure primitive model.
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1159/...c0285f0375.jpg
AIE416H Portable Turret
oh come on isn't it obvious that he was modeling with 3 monkeys jumping up and down on his lap... /random
at any rate, yeah there pretty simple for a 4 hour job XD but I guess its because you never plane modeled before :D
EDIT: the portable turret doesnt look that bad, needs more details though..
Rain.. i could have made that in 20 minutes...
blame the commies, tweek. lulz
wow and i thought i was a good modeler. all of this puts my work to shame.... i guess i just gotta try harder and keep practicing right? :embarrassed:
At least you admit it. Damn dude, 4 hours for that? I sure hope you were chatting with someone while you were modeling or something....Quote:
Originally Posted by FlamingRain
I don't understand why people have so much trouble with guns, their really not that hard.
:puke:Quote:
Originally Posted by FlamingRain
Oh my god, that TLS Hunter guy did a better job then you! Talk about extruding the wrong way! Oh my lord, pardon my french, but what the fook!? :fail:
Completely out of proportion, it matches the BASIC, but barely, BASIC shape of the sniper. Please l2plane model, for god sakes.
Uh, yeah I was doing about 40 other stuff. The actual time spent was like 20 minutes - 40 minutes.Quote:
Originally Posted by LlamaMaster
Time doesn't matter, lack of effort does.
Yup. I'm a failer ya thx.
thats a pink post, with a little golden edge around it right there.
i suggest we all make a printscreen, and save it, and treasure it.
Yay!!! Pink slip! I LIKE PINK :D.
you would.
http://www.sosexy.org/images/Jussim.jpgQuote:
Originally Posted by FlamingRain
Yeah..
Really. :eyesroll:
:XD:Quote:
Originally Posted by Tweek
Hey, stop shitting up the thread.
Lets get back on topic...
an odd shaped tunnel mb?
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/633/atunnelmbmu2.jpg
I was trying to think of some perverted hole joke, but I failed. :(Quote:
Originally Posted by Apoc4lypse
It's um, very....round....
wow, thats a huge hole
umm, it looks, terrain-y? I guess.
It's ok... I got your back...Quote:
Originally Posted by BobtheGreatII
That's what she said.... might make more sense as a that's what HE said...Quote:
Originally Posted by Wave of Lag
Anyway... can we see some idea of scale? If that's something for the MC to walk through, then it's decent sized, and really high poly... but if it's something you could drive a scorpion or god-help-you, a scarab... that is a huge-ass hole. (:lol:)
I really wasn't aiming for much criticism as I didn't really show it all, because I'm not sure if its something I plan to finish...
I just needed to save the thread with a new wip so ppl would quit arguing over nonsense :D
But yes it is a big hole, actually a warthog will be able to drive through it comfortably if it ever goes in game.
EDIT: I find it funny that because of the perspective everyone is thinking the hole is huge lol.
i modeled this yesterday. now i realize that i suck something awful at modeling, and that im gonna get flamed to death, but i figured why not. ill show a pic.
edit: duh..... i forgot to say that this is a knock off of the halo 3 trip mine. i say knockoff becuase it doesn't even have the proper amount of those things on the outside
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s...ipminereal.jpg
It's awful, but you realize it which is a HUGE step up from other noobs.
Yea, your dead on, and that puts you above the other people who are like OMG MY MODELS PWN. These are the type of models I started with adn you kinda remind me of myself a couple years ago.Quote:
Originally Posted by Donut
it's not as terrible as most crap that you see on this forum.
(that's a positive thing btw:awesome:)
that's what he said.Quote:
Originally Posted by Wave of Lag
it's really not that good but it ain't god awful either. just keep practicing and try new methods. btw we don't flame people who can't model. just flame people who can't model then get all cocky about it. and snaf and me can generally be rather rough but usually have no intention of flaming we're just tryin to get the point across it needs extreme improvement >_>. and tbh smash, you're rather decent but you have much room for improvement. (not meant to be an insult just sayin you need more practice).
and tweek just says everything most people are thinking who don't want to be asses at the time :awesome:
<3
anywho back on topic
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v7.../HMMWVwip4.jpg
it's somewhere in the 4,000 tri area i forget. also still has some work to be done on the back as you can notice some smoothing errors at this moment
looks cool. you might want to invest a little bit on the hood. especially the headlights, octagons ftl. hmmh i could be wrong, but the wheels look a bit small. got more crits, but i'll keep em to myself, or some idiot might suspect me of flaming :awesome:
also, i'm a jerk :awesome:Quote:
and tweek just says everything most people are thinking who don't want to be asses at the time :awesome:
<3
:awesome: <- best smiley ever.
they're just a tad small but they were just place holders really cause the real wheels don't have such a massive indent. i should get a more recent render. >_>Quote:
Originally Posted by Tweek
yea lights and such need to be fixed.
zomg flamer y be asses to meh :suicide:
I'm still still trying to work out how a smiley with the URL "fuckyou.gif" and the markup code :iamafag: came to mean *awesome.* :raise:Quote:
Originally Posted by Tweek
OHMYGODfixthebackQuote:
Originally Posted by PenGuin1362
Back looks just fine to me...:eyesroll:'
Just a few smoothing problems.
ftfyQuote:
Originally Posted by n00b1n8R
Back needs the hatch open, as the passenger seat location. Shooting out of a window isn't going to be too great for the passenger. If not, then at least add some detail to it.
I might just be retarded but I thought humvees weren't diesel.
there's no detail to put into it. lights can be taken care of with a skin that way we can save tris for other areas the player will see more of. ie the gun. which, for a vehicle weapon, has a considerable amount of detail. (however the player will see it as an fp weapon). the back hatch will not open because there is already a helicopter for troop transport. the seats in the humvee will most likely be the only seats. if i change my mind then i'll do the back hatch open. plus there will be no shooting out of the humvee. there's a .50 cal mounted on top. that's quite enough.
Redundant.Quote:
Originally Posted by PenGuin1362
:gonk: I thought Leiukemia could do better.Quote:
Originally Posted by Leiukemia
Still good though.
Yes. :)Quote:
Originally Posted by rossmum
Blegh. It's because I'm not creative enough. If I actually had some plans and pictures of a real base I could do much better. It's just my damn lack of imagination.
There is some thing as help, some people refer to it as hold-my-hand-modeling but I just call it help.
EDIT:
Uh, asking someone for ideas? :\
??Quote:
Originally Posted by SilentWindPL
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Originally Posted by Leiukemia
mb?Quote:
Originally Posted by SilentWindPL
?? You just switched my response upside down. How does that explain anything?Quote:
Originally Posted by ExAm
mb?Quote:
Originally Posted by SilentWindPL
Same problem here, but your imagination is still better than mine...Quote:
Originally Posted by Leiukemia
lol, I have the exact opposite problem, my modelling skill doesn't match my ability to visualize and stuff, although it gets closer every day.Quote:
Originally Posted by Leiukemia
I have the same problem as Massacre, I can visualize what I want, but when I try to make it, it's a big box with little dents in it here and there.
Still trying to get the hang of Plane Modeling.
:picsorstfu:
Please.
wait what? I can post concept art then the model if thats what you want?Quote:
Originally Posted by BobtheGreatII
I don't care lol, I got sick of all the crazy, It is a Gallery Topic after all:
http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/7340/m111md5.png
OLD!!!!
MAIR-40 for Entropy
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/7...ir40allmm6.png
http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/9...eperatebl4.png
lol, that gun is so huge, it looks like it launches a calibre round above .50.
Yeah, lol, it does it looks like it's the size of a legless coffee table or something.Quote:
Originally Posted by Wave of Lag
still cool though I think.
rofl, you know somethings wrong with your gun when its compared to a coffee table :awesome:
I edited his post a bit to make it understandable, to a point. I probably should have highlighted the change in red.Quote:
Originally Posted by Leiukemia
Oh I saw the edit. I just didn't understand why he was saying it.
I didn't notice that, yeah wtf?Quote:
Originally Posted by rossmum
lol, I hope thats just there for rendering purposes, I don't wanna be shooting people with a high poly FPS lag machine/coffee table. :D
yet again not to say it ain't cool, or that I could do better.
i could do better :haw:
you>me.
I would be shocked testicless if I met someone who thought otherwise. :)
Reminds me of this:
http://img.redwolfairsoft.com/upload...g/WA2000-L.jpg
Neat stuff.
