If I can picture what's going on in my head you did a good job, and I can. But why is Jason there in the first place?
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If I can picture what's going on in my head you did a good job, and I can. But why is Jason there in the first place?
Thats what I was about to ask. I got the perfect visual. Just need to know why Jasons there.
When writing, avoid using specific names without describing what they mean, and sometimes describing them can be awkward (I cringed when I read the phrase "...on his Heads-Up Display (HUD)..." in Contact Harvest >_< )
So sometimes it's best to use a generic term - It's not guaranteed that the reader is going to know what a Stryker is. I'd suggest replacing that with "personnel carrier"
Otherwise, your use words with regard to the text that is there purely to frame each use of my first name is satisfactory :v:
Keep it up.
Is that the end? Kind of abrupt. When you end a story, you need to let the reader know the end is coming. Wind it down, bring it to a close proper. I'll check yer grammar later, I'm going to bed.
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The first one reminds me of the Parasite Queen from Metroid Prime for some reason.
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Awesome. :3
+rep if I can.
Looks like colons draped on spines and a foot.
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Reminds me of H.R. Giger. :0
You could use some practice with perspective, but otherwise that stuff's looking good. I'm seeing good shading and interesting details.
Very awesome style Boba. Now all you need is a wacom and some dedication to photoshop and you'll be owning concept art in no time.
Woah, sweet. What game is that from? 0_o
Bahahaha
/coincidence
I wish I could draw that good. :(
+rep
wow that is quite good.
im thinking of showing some of my stuff eventually.
and @ Boba
you weapon concepts, may i use any of them to loosely base some 3d models on?
by loosely, i mean mean, my models may only use a few concepts of the gun, then the rest would be pulled out of my behind.
i just want to have permission to use them cause they are fairly large images, and their proportions are good, and also the flat color makes it an easier reference for me when modeling.
Holy shit I just realized this is boba's thread. Post deleted to prevent threadhijack D:
No harm. Exam. I was going to let you run with it anyway. :p
And, L4me, you can use anything you want. If anyone wants to use something for some reason, you can go ahead and use it. I just record ideas, not use them. :-3
LOL?Quote:
Originally Posted by Boba
thanks, thats great :)Quote:
Originally Posted by Boba
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Santa :iia:
Cool
Awesome shit man. :3
one of your best. Could use a few more shades of gray, though. great definition.
Looks ace.
Very bobalicious.
Damn boba, your sketches are so damn fascinating.
badass.
Boba, YOU'RE A DOUCHE IF YOU THINK YOU SUCK. THOSE ROCK.
It's a series of tubes!
Very cute bobalefette.
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I like! :)
Looks like the position we got ourselves stuck into...
I mean looks like the position I got stuck into...
What is that supposed to be anyway?
It's very confusing, but I like it a lot, lots of detail.
Holy shit, I wanna see that Covie Howitzer made.
It's cool looking, but it makes no sense, at all. However I don't think that's what you were going for. But yeah pretty cool.
Done!
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Looks awesome but what is it and what does it do?
You should give chains a lot of pointers. You did a lot right with this. It has somewhat crisp details, varying lineweights, a range of gray values, etc. Keep up the good work.Quote:
Originally Posted by Boba
Wow, awesome stuff bro. :3
You needed to get a tablet sooner, lol.
I got bored, so I went ahead and did a little doodling!
http://i251.photobucket.com/albums/g...tt76/elite.png
P.S. It's an elite :|
Great stuff man, I like it. : D
You should do more parts of the armor rather than just the helmet alone. I'd love to see what a chest and shoulders specifically would look like.
Looks like your using fuller strokes.
Why is there a zipper on his face?Quote:
Originally Posted by Boba
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Boba if you don't stop you're going to be famous.
imo finish the rest of the elite armor, follow that style through, secondly, good stuff, keep at it.
Holy shit this is awesome stuff. That front of the thing you just started reminds me of Alien Vs Predator.
Badass Boba.
How do you go from crap like your Avitar to crap like that?
By taking crit.
He didnt make his avatar.
That avatar is not crap, it's the embodiment of all awesome
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wow...Quote:
Originally Posted by killer9856
You know what it reminds me of?
http://www.best-horror-movies.com/im...ster-small.jpg
http://images.allmoviephoto.com/1979..._alien_015.jpg
1979
I dont like it now that it has that elongated crown. It was cooler as a skull on a long neck. Seemed more malicious.
Wait, what. :raise:Quote:
Originally Posted by Heathen
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Good work, but now you should really start doing more perspective, it is hard but you won't improve if you don't.
Looks great though man.
Wow, that's great.
That is some really good work. The sluggish sack at the end could use a little more defining though.
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Must have been one hell of a candle.
:eek:
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It looks great duder.
Your getting better with each new addition.
Keep it up man.
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Nice face hugger mang. :3Quote:
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It's lookin' good, just add more detail to the face/head. o:
The head seems... flat. I suppose that the lack of shading could be causing that, but even the face doesn't seem to have the sense of depth I get from the rest of it.
One of your best Boba, the head is a bit flat though...
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That's good shit my friend, very good.
I'd go for a more black and silver color.
While that would look good too, I think the brown makes it creepier and more gross. Its like when you see a cockroach and freak out, except with a huge ass alien. That would be scary as hell to see.Quote:
Originally Posted by Heathen
excellence.
Keep on pushing boba, you need to work on some of your detailing, and try more colours, very subtly, still can go with the brown, but had some slight hues of teal and greyish purple, just really slight, trust me itll give it a really nice membrany look.
[thumb]http://i251.photobucket.com/albums/gg319/BobaTheFett76/thelastalien.png[/thumb]
This is my last alien sketch that I'll post in this thread, seeing as how they're getting fucking boring.
Boba I'm getting pretty fucking tired of your drawings...
dude dont stop completely, at least put it off until you feel like doing something extraordinarily organic
What's it standing on?
Ignore him, keep drawing, keep posting, I love your work. Just try to make the leap like you did on the colored one above and quit doing side shots and try dynamic perspective drawings that are more interesting.
Yeah, any idiot can draw side views but perspective is hard. I can replicate a Spitfire Mk.I through IX on paper accurate down to the rivet but the moment I try and do so with a proper 3D perspective view... :smith:
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That is great baby :3
It seems low res, did you zoom into the part you had painted, or is that the full canvas?
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Which way is the light coming from? Since it is rounded and smooth, depending on where the light comes from, it wouldn't cover it like that. Also I found if I paint like that, doing once piece and filling in all the details, it becomes tiring and boring and takes a long time, try blocking out lighitng, shadows and basic structures on the whole body first, then refine it and go into details, goes much faste and oyu have a higher chance of getting it done. :)
I cant believe I missed this thread! Wow, amazing things Boba! Inspiring to say the least. :O
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Very cute. Nice work boba.
How'd that feel when it came out of your vagina?!
That looks cool, what the hell were smoking/taking when you were thinking of this?
I'm pretty sure it was acid..
[thumb]http://i251.photobucket.com/albums/gg319/BobaTheFett76/GMFirsttrybars.png[/thumb]
My first gmod screenshot (Rossmum, feel free to beat the shit out of me).
Really awesome stuff here. Whats with the screen shot? I dont get it. :o
It's edited.
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because IRIS is dead?
plasma rifle could do without the upper rear spike, but that's the most original take on it that I've seen. are the parts right in front of that spike batteries?
That PR mockup is pretty cool. I could see it in a game like Prey.
I can see alot of alien inspiration. I like the art style. Also makes the pr look hardcore. :)
