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Hunter, none of your models are good tbh. :X
All you did was make the outline, extrude, and copy the faces from the other side to the other. The longsword doesn't look like you are following the reference.
Also, extruded and beveled cylinder != scope.
I do believe you can make a pretty darn good scope with just extrude and bevel on a cylinder. He just didn't.Quote:
Originally Posted by flyinrooster
Bit of a back log reply, but Madworks the UT3 Engine makes that look even more amazing :lol:
I've played GOW on my friends PC, its pretty damn good, considering it was on the 360.
I'll have to pick it up...or mb not, i might just still get UT3 it's self next month and map for that...hmmm.
Anyway good work.
How would you ever attach it to the gun then? :raise:Quote:
Originally Posted by Chewy Gumball
Why does everything look spectacular? Besides the tires, that is?Quote:
Originally Posted by madworkz
The rubber has no color depth and the bumps seem to be formless. :(
I've seen much worse. I like it.Quote:
Originally Posted by JunkfoodMan
anyway, I have another update on my map, this time the base(s), and I can't say what but I feel something is wrong/missing.
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o...yabbadabba.jpg
Looks awesome to me. I agree that it might need ***something*** but I don't know what.
You're missing a map with this base in it.
Looks great, although you may need a pane of glass to cover that hole
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Originally Posted by Hurrvish
We are doing an investigationIt's in progress.
Also, how about an interior instead :downs:
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o...abbadabba2.jpg
Fixed an error.
i see what you fixed, much better.
Yes, it is better. That non planar was ugly. D:
Anyway, it looks like the door near the front only leads out the opposite way. If this is the case, I suggest making another doorway into a/the (depending if this is even established) room under the opening at the top. It seems to serve little purpose but for a small amount of cover if it just leads out the other way.
It could possibly lead to a small teleporter? But probably not.:)
It will. I haven't done the interior yet, I was just wondering what people thought of the exterior.Quote:
Originally Posted by flyinrooster
We was not be talking about attaching a scope to a gun now was we?:downs:Quote:
Originally Posted by flyinrooster
Mass, I see you've taken inspiration from h3's control room exterior, so why not add another level?
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/7944/14556607qj7.jpg
Note the weapon placements on top of the base and inside the ramp room, also the red highlighted area where theres some grossies.
edit: flag should be inside that room you can jump down into from the roof, while players should spawn on top.
I'VE BEEN EXPOSED.
I was thinking about it just before I read that post, actually, and I'm thinking it will be like that but almost completely buried and mostly for visuals. it'll be good looking if it resembles the idea I have in my head.
E: I see your edit and raise you an "I agree."
if it's half buried, that's a good way to cover up one or two of the many entrances into the place too.
These are getting worse and worse, I think I'm gonna do something like this:
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o...tos/buried.jpg
I think it's missing variation on the floor upstairs.
Oh, and that front part with the bars; it looks like shit, sorry D:
well that's a first.
I don't like it mass, the "nose" is just too freaking long and dull.
perhaps if it had a steeper angle and second angle (like on forruner pipes) I'd like it better, but as it is It's a rare dose of Mass Brand™ do-not-want.
actually, it reminds me of a wine bottle :S
tried for an hour or so to get that idea into existance a bit more.
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o...yabbadabba.jpg
looks OK.
i don't like how it's so stretched though.
it feels like it's only a small part of a larger structure.
make bug structure connected to it.
GOGO
or build into canyon wall with other protrusions for snipers/inacessible higher up.
It looks abit better, but still it's too long IMO :|
IAWTPQuote:
Originally Posted by Tweek
Screw YouQuote:
Originally Posted by n00b1n8R
umm..
I was basically agreeing with tweek and suggesting a way to give it the appearence of the entrance to a much larger structure.
<__<
LIAR
stop agreeing with me, bandwagon bitch.
lololol
N U :bandwagon:
Well you need to look at the halo 3 long sword and mine because i think you will notice that they are extremely similar, if you had a wire frame of the halo 3 long sword.
i have.Quote:
Originally Posted by TLSHunter
no theyre not.
no you can't.
Didn't look like he was finished. Post it again when you're done.
I'm back from my vacation to Florida!
I took your guys' advice and started over from scratch. I gathered more reference pics, and now I have the legs to my All Terrain Armored Transport mostly finished:
http://i203.photobucket.com/albums/a...645/AT-AT4.jpg
Please don't hurt me...
Do the legs look any better this time? I tried my best to scale everything as well as I can. Here's a comparison of the AT-AT and MC:
http://i203.photobucket.com/albums/a...645/AT-AT5.jpg
Yes, the rear of the legs do need work, the back isn't as pretty as the front, that's why they are MOSTLY finished. You won't see the back of the top circles on the legs, those are going to be covered up by the drive shaft.
Any comments?
hey im new to these forums and all ..ive just made a an uzi and i wanted to get some feedback so im posting it here
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/2...inishedat5.png
Mass, I'm going to invite you to my house for Thanksgiving, then you will proceed to have my children. Good? Good.Quote:
Originally Posted by Massacre
anybody have any suggestions or good feedback for my uzi?
Sometimes you need to wait a while for someone to respond to a question.Quote:
Originally Posted by disaster
Sorry, but you don't have the sex organs required. Unless you pay me $400, then i'll fix you up.Quote:
Originally Posted by =EP_T33KUP
Where have you been, I've had them installed for the past week. D: <
If you insist...Quote:
Originally Posted by =EP_T33KUP
You still have to come to my house with lube, candles, condoms, and 5 russian men for me >:(Quote:
Originally Posted by Massacre
And my wallet >_>
Right....listen I'll have them soon...
Anyway, I tried to take Tweek's advice.
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o.../epicified.jpg
looks nice but that extruded outline thi sux.
ill draw up some suggewstion web uts not 4:50 am
I know, I've been trying to think up a good way to get some deatail on that wall, because right now, I hate it.Quote:
Originally Posted by Tweek
:smith:
Now thats what I call Improvement.Quote:
Originally Posted by Massacre
I got a burning hardon looking at that mass.
That extrusion in the "main" flat wall thing, it shouldn't follow the exact shape again. Look at the forerunner textures I sent you to see what I mean.
Otherwise, HOT.
Also mad, your atv's specular needs serious work, but it's looking great. Needs to be more dull overall, but more contrasted.
I call that sex hot steaming sex. Ah fuck, I need to spread before givin'.Quote:
Originally Posted by SilentWindPL
the cliffs are a bit ugly, but the structure is hawt
can someone please tell me what they think about my model?
i want to know badly
I love it mass, and as for that uzi that got posted, not really sure if it's yours or not buddy. If you just show up now with 3 posts and a nice looking model, don't blame us for being suspicious, it happens all the time.
lol i can assure you i made it..go looking around and ill even get you a wf pic
wireframe doesn't prove anything, you'll just have to show some WIP models so we can see your progress.
wwait, are you claiming mass' work as your own?Quote:
Originally Posted by disaster
Nvm, got confuzzled.
no my uzi dude..the one i gave you earlier
it sucks on epic proportions.
there.
happy now?
lol really?
Tweek is always serious..Quote:
Originally Posted by disaster
ok..fine..i thought it was good
Yeah, that model is kinda blech.
I mean, it looks good, but looking at the wireframe it looks blech.
proportions are bad. also, your sig is too big, fix it. now. also, the render sucks.
The render and your name...what a coincidence.
well disaster, you didn't get totally flamed. i really hope you take the crit and work on it some, cause the fact that ppl didn't say "it sux you sux gtfo" says to me that you've got potential.
Too bad no-one told him to get the fuck out.Quote:
Originally Posted by Rob Oplawar
Disaster get the fuck out you shit person you.
snaf..can you tell me where the proportions are wrong so i can fix it up. and also plz tell me whats wrong with it..not just: it sucks
You should get multiple references for that Uzi.
things that caught my eye specifically are the dodgy barrel size, weapon width, and sights. Find high res images of the uzi so that you can see the details better, too.
lol i did get hi res pics..i had multiple ones too..oh yeah its supposed to be an uzi micro not a regular one. its thick the barrel is somewhat small and the sights are that big.. see heres the reference that i specificaly used in max to move the verts and edges
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/5...uzipistwt9.jpg
I can already tell you were way off on following your references...
how?..i just didnt put that clip holder at bottom and i made the clip a bit longer so it would actually look like an uzi?
Yes, that. Plus, you just didn't follow the proportions.
e: Also, it must not look like an uzi, because what you modified was what a real one looked like. Good going. :downs:
lol ok ill make clip smaller..and the proportions are right let me show you the reference i followed for thickness
http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/5...ipistolvl5.gif
Yes, now show the uzi at that angle for a decent comparison.
You must have bad eyesight, also look at the trigger-guard thing. It's thin, yours is thick and ugly. Thats one thing I can notice.
Bright and hard to make out details.. If there are any details to begin with.
k here it is fixed and i know i need to smooth it
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/2291/uziproofzt1.png
Fix the trigger guard to be thinner, and the back of the handle is rounded. More round then you have it. Look at the reference.
thank you for helping me + rep im fixing those now
EDIT: ok i did smoothing really fast and fixed the proportions that you told me if you still see errors then tell me
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/1...mootheddl1.png
i still see errors, and your smoothing is a failure.
Plus your missing loads of details...
It's very inaccurate. Make sure to get more references. Would you like to see pics mine to get a better idea of how it should look? How much detail should be implemented. Dont rely detail on the skin. Looks like box modeling with extrudes and bevels which is the extremely wrong way to model guns. Correct me if im wrong.Quote:
Originally Posted by disaster
Trying to get the tone right for human structures, haven't done any in quite a while.
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o...hotos/fort.jpg
your crack fails.
and the collumns tingys dont really fit in.
the round holes, are. well, too round. especially the big hole in the wall, it should be more random cracks and stuff, it's too perfect and round.
that rock panels tutorial thing i made might give you a bit of a clue.
the crack is too smooth and straight. Make it more jagged....Quote:
Originally Posted by Massacre
Quote:
Originally Posted by Massacre
Those cracks are gay.
Maybe hop off the bandwagon? Also, most columns like that have a part going inward on the outside. Can't really explain it. :\
Seriously, I already regard what Tweek has to say very highly, when you repeat it it just seems to get to be a worse idea.
He's usually right and if he's already said do you honestly think anyone cares that you agree?
You even squeezed out more use of "gay" ffs.
Tweek is being blunt, you're being an asshat.
What? I can't post my own FUCKING opinion on something, just because it might be a restate of what somebody else said?
Grow the fuck up, learn that people all have their own opinions, some people the same, some people different.
I hadn't seen Tweek's post until after I posted, but you know what? It seems to be that if I AGREE with ANYTHING it seems to be me sucking up to them and wanting to kiss their ass, well guess what.
Game over.
cracks aside, i still say the underside of the awning is too flat. it needs some horizontal i-beams supporting it or something. Also, the 45 degree slop that the crack is in still seems very much more forerunner than human to me.
edit: @fr: wow dude chill out. Man, what is it about the internet that makes everybody take everything the wrong way?
Who bets my rep (not the bars) will go in a ditch again by the end of today?
[ot]keep making posts like that in the gallery thread and it will[/ot]
@Mass: It occurred to me that it needs lights and security cameras and speakers and other random things placed on the walls, but those are best done with scenery. Hmm, you should play through the second level of Halo 3, I forget what it's called. Use that as inspiration.
Hey guys, guess what? instead of yelling at eachother like pansies, you could have read the rules and then taken correct action (but, warning is all we can do)
Lets look at the rulebook, eh? heres a link for the lazies--http://www.h2vista.net/forums/announcement.php?f=2
Now, in all actuality--massacres model isn't god awful but it isn't the best and he knows it, because its a ONLY A MODEL STUDY. he wants crit, and what tweek (and kenney, even) have done are what massacre asked for. So, next time, remember why we have a warning system instead of just yelling at the person :vQuote:
Originally Posted by THE MOFUGGIN RULES
I actually quite like the supporting beams on the outside and the little walkway you have in there. The crack looks like a slash more than some sort of explosives damage. Try to rework that a little bit. The bunker you have on the left is a bit plain looking, but I like the styling of the rest.Quote:
Originally Posted by Massacre
I think it looks awesome.
You know i see it as a shame when people just use a skylight. Check out my rendering tutorial and see if it works for you, if it doesnt try out Lieuks.Quote:
Originally Posted by Massacre
http://www.h2vista.net/forums/showthread.php?t=6173
Can you put skylights at an angle?
no, you angle the camera.
it's not a directed light at all, it's global illumination.
and then some camera angle shit.
i dunno why it works the way it does, i just know how it works.
just adding an omni, or spot will make a huge difference though
If that's for Halo, the battle damage is really unnecessary, there's no battle damage in any Halo multiplayer map except chilloutQuote:
Originally Posted by Massacre