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The hip region and the armour there looks like it could use some work, unless you're trying to copy the guy in your avatar (assuming that you didn't make the guy in your avatar). If you did, then the helmet also looks kind of odd, as if it were meant for a lizard-man or something. Yet again, I don't know enough about what you're making to give more the best crit.
Yeah, he's pretty much a remake of the guy in my avatar (which I also made) with changes to stop his armour from stabbing him whenever he moved a muscle. I'm going along the lines of a lizardesqe/velociraptor shaped head too, which is why the helmets that shape.
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agreedHoly shit, I was typing and you guys double posted on my slow ass :(
Oh, and Dano, it still seems that the character is 2D. Im sure once you model it that it will come out nicely because it is all up in your noodle, but until then the illusion of depth is hardly achieved.
But it wuz a concept :(
I know I'm crappy at perspective and what not. I find it really hard to draw proportions correctly. I have improved ALOT in the last month if you seen my sketch book though. Really though, the modelled and skinned and UT3'd version will kick ass.
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But it wuz a concept :(
I know I'm crappy at perspective and what not. I find it really hard to draw proportions correctly. I have improved ALOT in the last month if you seen my sketch book though. Really though, the modelled and skinned and UT3'd version will kick ass.
why not start with an already made render, and paint over that, that way you dont have to worry about proportions or perspective, and can just get to the actual designing and artwork.
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why not start with an already made render, and paint over that, that way you dont have to worry about proportions or perspective, and can just get to the actual designing and artwork.
i think it was a school assignment, the instructor probably wouldn't let him use it because then he wouldn't be learning how to do proportions, its also probably why he only painted it with the brush tool--as an exercise.
Lol, i bet dano's one of the best in the class. Or second best, theres almost always that one asshole who never got his degree but he's finally doing it and he thinks he's so awesome because he has experience in the field already so he thinks he's the shit, and always says stuff in class when the instructor is lecturing, like "oh yea maya, i remember how crappy that tool was/how well that modelling packaged worked for me!", argh
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Really well done.
I especially like the shading and detail on the tyres.
Where's the antenna in the front and rear views?
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http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/6...night08yh8.jpg
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/7...night09wz1.jpg
http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/2...night10nv5.jpg
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/1...ight10awo2.jpg
Am I doing it right?
Stuff I that know about or has been fixed :
-Wierd black spot on the right arm in the top pic
-Top 2 pics have some bad geometry on the shoulder pads, this has since been taken care of
-Glove smoothing is off, trying to make it as clean as possible
-Lines down the mask and feet are supposed to be there, as per this
-Poly wastage on the eyes, those are getting cut down.
-Sword look like a plastic toy, not much I can do to solve that without a proper skin
-Wing triangulation isn't so great, but that was what got them to fold up the best when I rigged them.
-I also know that in the above ref pic his feet are wider; I preferred the look of the ones I have here though. If a lot of people disagree I'll change them.
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Looking pretty good to me :)
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triangulation on the wings needs fixing.
other wise, i can't really find much to whine about.
maybe keep the eyes to textures, instead of geometry
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There looks like there is something going on right above the eye. And what tweek said about the eye but i guess it would look better as in sticking out just a bit so it might be better to keep it like that. Other than that I like.
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Fucking awesome meta knight.
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n00b1n8R
Really well done.
I especially like the shading and detail on the tyres.
Where's the antenna in the front and rear views?
Heh thanks, and its a WIP so no antenna yet, that will get done as I get closer to finishing.
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Something looks wrong with the left eye.
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http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/6529/heatherza0.jpg
=X Yea I know the hand is o__O.. but it matches exactly how her hand was in the pic I was given as reference. And it didnt help that the pic had terrible lighting and detail was mehh.
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nice, i like it, but is she mentally disabled or socially inept?, coz that pose seems out of the norm.
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nice, i like it, but is she mentally disabled or socially inept?, coz that pose seems out of the norm.
http://a694.ac-images.myspacecdn.com...cb90d14cd5.jpg
Odd pose. But w/e =x
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it's shooped, i can see it in the pixels.
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Tweek
it's shooped, i can see it in the pixels.
xkcd?
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i thought that was the photo he was using for reference.
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Meta Knight is looking great indeed. Though the feet should go a bit more on the side of the body instead of the bottom. Also, the mask doesn't curve that much at the bottom part of the visor.
e: Maybe make the shoulder pads a bit bigger, or the arms a bit shorter. Metaknight has more hands than arm IIRC.
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Hair + Stock chart = Unrealistic
Try making your hair more loose, don't outline the edges.
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Is it legal to post renders of maps ive made, just never releast? Or is that too much like the ce image gallery?
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Tweek
I think this one is better:

But I rather like Meta Knight. Out of all the new characters in Brawl, he's my best.
Actually, he's my best character in all of Brawl, period. Right behind him are Mario and Pikachu, who, incidentally, have been my best characters in every other Super Smash Bros. game to date.
And paladin, it's OK. Same rules as the old HCE Gallery Thread.
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holly shit you've been working on that for a long time. i think i saw that the first time i joined Gearbox.... like 2 years ago O___o?
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What's all this terminal i see thar?
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Yeah I saw it too, needs more screenshots :)
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Anything dealing with Terminal automatically gets my stamp of "NEEDS MOAR RELEASE!"
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I didn't want to make a new thread for this so I'm posting it here for criticism. >:(
New Halo 3 FP arms based more off of the Starry Night chief.
http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u...rmFinished.jpg
I hope it works with Halo animations so Masterz will kidnap me. Lulz.
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uhhh I'm really bad at this digital painting stuff

I dunno, on paper, it seems like I have more control. Probably just the brush I'm using.
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Wait, that image makes coffee :o?
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^I agree, fuck Photoshop. Tradition kicks your ass. :fuckoff:
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I didn't want to make a new thread for this so I'm posting it here for criticism. >:(
New Halo 3 FP arms based more off of the Starry Night chief.
http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u...rmFinished.jpg
I hope it works with Halo animations so Masterz will kidnap me. Lulz.
Needs more pads on the tops of the fingers.
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ßðÐŻÍ££å
holly shit you've been working on that for a long time. i think i saw that the first time i joined Gearbox.... like 2 years ago O___o?
Meh, only like 1 year, and thats a really old shot. The design has changed and the shaders look 1000 times better.
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What's all this terminal i see thar?
Yessir...
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Yeah I saw it too, needs more screenshots :)
Mayba...
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Anything dealing with Terminal automatically gets my stamp of "NEEDS MOAR RELEASE!"
Doubt it. After I saw the CMT had one way back when, I said id never release this. Its 100% custom and dead accuarte in my books. I months spent months on it.
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Needs more pads on the tops of the fingers.
I'd put those on there, but it might screw up the rig. I'll have to talk to HDoan about it and see if there's room for them. I would've put them on anyway, but it's already around 3500 polygons. Please don't ask me to find out how many triangles.
EDIT: Nevermind. I'm not going to be able to put 'em on. :(
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Doubt it. After I saw the CMT had one way back when, I said id never release this. Its 100% custom and dead accuarte in my books. I months spent months on it.
We never have had a terminal, you are thinking of Zteam.
Anyway, iI been working on this in Digital Imaging. Is till have alot of work to do with the buildings, and alot of cleaning up to do. I'm also going to probably add in some more highlights.
http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/8...derman2oc9.jpg
It started out as a B&W sketch, I didn't draw it.
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Pretty nice. Other than the minor errors (underside of the right building's eve being blue, areas around his left hand, etc.) and some of the original creator's oddities (bricks on the right building and chimney are too bold for my taste), its quite visually pleasing. Definitely go for more highlights on his suit. It will help to make him pop off of the page.
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Masterz1337
We never have had a terminal, you are thinking of Zteam.
Anyway, iI been working on this in Digital Imaging. Is till have alot of work to do with the buildings, and alot of cleaning up to do. I'm also going to probably add in some more highlights.
It started out as a B&W sketch, I didn't draw it.
Gotcha...
Regaurdless, I mostlikely will not release it. I dont even think I have the tag files for it.
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Conscars
Flower porn ew ew
lolgeorgiaokeefe
I like the drawing, masterz.
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I like the blue, very cool.
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So I was listening to the 1812 Overture, and it became clear to me what I must do:
Currently colouring it in.
Also, from my collection of random illustrations and shit of story characters I hope to put in an epic HL2 mod (when I learn to make SP shit, not just basic MP maps):
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s...etchsketch.jpg
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s...rosssketch.jpg
Also some poses (I did the black uniform skins, as well as the mud-streaked one in the first pic):
Also, Tiger II (heavy WIP):
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hey, nice piece you got there ross.
if i were you i'd do something more with the tracks, it's wip, so for all i know you were already planning on it.
i'd also redo the front and back wheel, (most forward and most back) they definately need reworking and more polies.
looks good man.
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if thats what happens when you listen to orchestrate Overtures, i'd love to see what happens when you listen to one of Dream theaters :o
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Tweek
hey, nice piece you got there ross.
if i were you i'd do something more with the tracks, it's wip, so for all i know you were already planning on it.
i'd also redo the front and back wheel, (most forward and most back) they definately need reworking and more polies.
looks good man.
Yeah, at first I was all "oh I'll keep it under 10k so RO doesn't shit brix", but then I looked at the count when it was about 75% done and :gonk:'d... passed 15 without even noticing. I may as well make a proper job of it and take it up to 20, so long as I don't have too many in the one map it should still be alright.
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Cool tank there hebrew head.
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This May - Ross is back, and this time, he's doin' vehicles.
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Rossmum in, doing a tiger. Rated R for sexual and graphic content.
He's only doin vehicles cause he can't do a mosin :downs:
lookin good ross, you actually came close to finishing a model!
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http://tn3-1.deviantart.com/fs28/300...DEElekgolo.png
I fractal i made. Check out the rest of my devart for some other stuff.
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Rossmum in, doing a tiger. Rated R for sexual and graphic content.
He's only doin vehicles cause he can't do a mosin :downs:
lookin good ross, you actually came close to finishing a model!
seriously ross, finish the damn m nagant. Also, i really love the tank. I dont know too much about the detail, so i cant comment on it, but it looks sexcellent. Wireframes.
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Nagant is temporarily called off due to me realising what a horrid mess the stock and receiver are going to be when I redo them. Hopefully I'll be able to pick myself one up nice and cheap this weekend so I can get better refs, if so I'll probably continue working on it. Also;
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This May - Ross is back, and this time, he's doin' vehicles.
Because antlions are so last season. :downs:
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So I was listening to the 1812 Overture, and it became clear to me what I must do:
You never told me you were going to use my likeness in a mod :D!!
Do you have any hi-res's of that headshot one? that would be an epic desktop.
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Nagant is temporarily called off due to me realising what a horrid mess the stock and receiver are going to be when I redo them. Hopefully I'll be able to pick myself one up nice and cheap this weekend so I can get better refs, if so I'll probably continue working on it.
They're like $300 in mint condition, plus maybe $20 for shipping. At least here they are >_>. Can't see why they'd be so much more over in the land down under.
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Very nice Kenny! thats a really nice render. at first glance that looks like real life. (whats that?) I'm working on a similar ocean scene but with a lighthouse. but i know i cant render as well as you.
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They're like $300 in mint condition, plus maybe $20 for shipping. At least here they are >_>. Can't see why they'd be so much more over in the land down under.
Imports going through Customs. :gonk:
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Imports going through Customs. :gonk:
those evil fuckers.
:gonk:
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Imports going through Customs. :gonk:
I'm sure you can find a mosin in Australia >_> therefore avoiding customs :downs:
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