making a higher resolution won't hurt anything. It will still apply to the uvws.
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making a higher resolution won't hurt anything. It will still apply to the uvws.
I had no idea lol.
The front of the wings of your ghost have a lot of unused black space, I don't like how that looks.
Honestly? You're bitching at him about the lack of AA? It's one thing to point out that the green background is bad or that the renders could be closer, but that's just ridiculously petty.
A few things :
1. For god's sake, please make the front indentations match the rest of the nose's outline. Look, I'll even draw a picture :
http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/6048/ghost01q.jpg
2. As also illustrated above, I think the wing would look better if you made that panel that still has the gray match its surroundings.
3. If you're going to have the top be so dirty/dusty, then have the same thing going for the front. It just looks discontinuous.
4. Either make the bottom of the seat not purple or have other parts of the skin match that color, right now it stands out quite a bit and (I don't think) that's a place you want to be especially noticeable compared to the rest of the object.
Ok, so couple days ago, I decided to get back into greyscale drawings, have not done them in a long time, but I excel pretty well warmed up.
So I decided i would make a nice sketch, I drew up an elite and decided to post. The resulting crit turned my opinion of my greyscales from mediocre to just shit. I was so embarrassed, I took it down. Here is what I posted:
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/n...litecopy-1.png
Posing was fucked, perspective was too, too busy on details with all the cross hatching, it was overall terrible. So I decided to practice over these last few days getting these down, and finally today I drew a final one, that I knew was all I could do by myself and that it was ready for crit.
Here is my revised sketch of an elite.
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/n...ns1/elite1.png
No seriously though, here it is.
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/n...awingelite.png
Hope you like.
Holy crap that is MUCH better. :D
Better, but don't tense every muscle in the drawing. Muscles work in opposition to each other. When one set is tensed, the other is relaxed.
Got it, like a rope on a pulley.
No, not like a pulley. Flex your arm so your bicep is stiffened. Feel the difference between the bicep and triceps. Your triceps should be soft. If you extend your arm, your bicep will be soft, and your triceps tightened up.
Muscle groups work like this on every animal on the planet. There is no way to make it believable if all muscles are tensed up.