Quick Crit thread 2012

Working on a few things, i suppose you could consider this a sign of things to come.
http://i1141.photobucket.com/albums/...4-35-50-55.jpg

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/4253709/cly...e%20colors.jpg

not sure what to do/am gong to do with the arms at the top and the bottom at the moment.

I know we're only seeing the diffuse (and maybe normals? Can't tell), but it looks really bad. :(

I don't play DOTA2 or use Zbrush (and my computer doesn't support 3D software anymore anyways), so don't take what I say for any sort of value. It looks like you still stuck to the high-poly pretty well at this point and, knowing you, the low-poly is better than anything I could do.

Nah, looks fine. Looks like you're following Dota's art style pretty well if you ask me. I get this weird feeling though that the blacks aren't popping enough. They seem kind of dull? I dunno. Looking at some people's Dota stuff, they really make the blacks stand out more, but I'm not too sure.

Dark Halcyon:
http://media.steampowered.com/apps/d...xtureGuide.pdf

alsy, itll be 256 texture.

this is 512, and way larger than youll ever see, even my final render for display wont be that big.
im not happy with a bunch of parts, so this isnt done yet heh.

its diffuse and normal only atm.

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Originally Posted by BobtheGreatII

Dark Halcyon:
http://media.steampowered.com/apps/d...xtureGuide.pdf

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Really informative and helped me understand. Thanks.

That's better, but can still be better. :realsmug:

that's better, but your lowpoly doesn't follow your highpoly vert well in many areas. i can tell from your projection, mostly on the left, in the middle-height.

also, cut your faces.

it's getting there!

10-20 minute sketch, wanting an opinion on any anatomical errors