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Aye, Its supposed to look like they're walking through tall grass, but It just looks like floating torso's. More detail in the grass, and make it look like its being pushed away by the soldiers. And the grenade explosion, Its kicking up dirt, but it seems to be having no effect on the blades of grass around it, fix that.
Mountain is good, you need more in the background though (I used the singular because I see virtually nothing to tell me otherwise); they never just 'end' suddenly, there would at least be some foothills or a proper cliff. The grass and trees have no definition at all and badly want some, because right now they just look like giant green blobs. The Marines are too bright, and the Covenant are hard to make out against the background. The dropship is way too stubby, unless it's meant to be banking left, in which case the perspective is stuffed.
Keep working on it, the mountain and sky are keepers at the very least.
I shall, here is just a small sketch I did last night before bed.
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/n...flood2copy.png
I don't get it.. does he not have arms? D:
I think his right hand should be up holding the rope (which should be tight), then the body is positioned pretty good and maybe make his left arm uhh i dunno :)
nice though.
Practicing on random scenery.http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/n...ins1/scene.png
Ok, at first, I thought you didn't like drawing legs or feet. Now it is apparent that you just don't like the bottoms of pictures. Why do you almost never draw them?
The grass around the rock spire is what you should've had in the other picture, you can actually tell what it is.
I know, that's why I was practicing it. :)