needs more black maybe
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You also made the whole front end blend together where it connects from behind the canopy and cockpit, when it should kind of look like you booleaned a cylinder into a prism(obviously don't do that, though)
Rudimentary paint picture done on a laptop touch pad
Red should be where the definition on the body is, green to give an idea of what the shape should be stemming from the body
Got it, thanks a lot.
This is my first time making something from the "real world", e.g. not something from sci-fi.
I don't quite know what I'm going to do with these models yet, but I'll find some use for 'em eventually. :p
Snaf sure hates clay renders :realsmug:
Jay next time you decide to model anything, I don't want you to touch the extrude or bevel button, becuase right now you obviously don't know how to use them properly. :downs:
...A tiny bit too late for that, although I really didn't touch them TOO much in this render.
http://i435.photobucket.com/albums/q...arksnormal.jpg
http://i435.photobucket.com/albums/q...termarks-3.jpg
For reference, this is what the old version looked like, from the same camera:
http://i435.photobucket.com/albums/q...termarks-4.jpg
E: Just caught a couple bad polygons on the right side of the top render.
http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u...g/KeyesWIP.png
High Deffin' the Keyes
more soon bro yeahhhhh