Quick-Crit 2008-2009

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Originally Posted by higuy

Your angles should be down a bit in the Hallway part that connects to the door. It's also quite messy in a few area's, with weird crumpled/faces, and smoothing won't really fix these as good as it could be, ingame at least.

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As i said the crimpled parts will be ironed out.

Finally got some free time today to finish up the shadows/highlights. Anything I should add or take away or improve?

Mouth looks too far up on his face and a little thick, little line under his mouth seems out of place...on new fred make the straight line inside his collar a little curved, on old fred get rid of that extra curve inside his ascot, just make it one smooth "U." Looks great otherwise though, nice work.

He's so smug

I'd shoop that into an MLG variant but I'm fucking lazy.

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Originally Posted by DEEhunter

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Dug the model out of windows.old
What should I add and such? Not asking about texturing obviously.

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Looks really interesting but overall seems too vertical.
It looks really interesting from that angle but I think from on the ground it will look more bland because less is being seen. Does that make sense?
I also can't really see any gameplay, mostly because I don't know how the player would move between levels. No visible ramps or ladders.

Wallpaper, as requested by Advancebo.

1920px × 1080px: http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/2784/siwallpaper.jpg

I don't really like the way that shade of red looks with the rest of it. Maybe I'm just used to the green/blue scheme usually found with the Superintendent, but there's some clashing going on there IMO.

The red-orange color was the one set for the ">>Mind the Gap<<" writing. Seriously. I can make a blue one, though.

e. here it is
http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/3...lpaperblue.jpg

i think it looks cool, it just looks too orange for my taste. darker red?