Middle thing reminds me alot of Killzone 2 Helghast.
Middle thing reminds me alot of Killzone 2 Helghast.
Was sick today, had time to work on this, about to go to bed, will finish legs tomorrow.
Why always the excuses?
Unfinished concept yet again only a quick sketch. Shadings wrong, it has no 'form'. body parts look very weird and blended together. All together it looks 'flat'. Color scheme is very bland.
Like I've said 3 times before, I'll go dig up the posts if I have to:
GET RID OF THE WHITE SPACE AND CROP THE IMAGE, THERES NO NEED FOR SUCH LARGE AMOUNT OF EMPTY SPACE! IS IT REALLY THAT HARD?
Here is your honest crit.
~Lag edit : Shot tags
Last edited by teh lag; February 25th, 2009 at 01:42 PM.
Your stuff is pretty legit, but I really, really agree with everyone when they say you should crop.
If you use Infarview, you can select an area and hit Ctrl-Y to crop, Ctrl-S to save. Otherwise just use MS Paint's edge drag tool. All that white is wasted space.
Yeah you know what, mookz thank you.
Snaf and silentwind and the rest of the gang can go fuck yourself. I do not want your crit anymore, art is an expression and form and if I want to do it in a certain way you can not do shit but press a little e-peen button that makes little pixels under my avatar go red or green, fuck you. I will keep posting, and it will be in my own style, with whatever shitty perspective comes out of it.
You say I do not listen to your crit, seems like a good thing to me, hell in 4 months I went from this:
To this:
Seeing as you think me being sick and having a set bedtime because I am kid are excuses, just an fyi I am going to finish the legs and add shadows.
Yeah smart ones, I still have not shaded it.
~Lag edit : If you MUST use those ridiculously large images then at least put on shot tags.
Last edited by teh lag; February 25th, 2009 at 01:44 PM.
Your work isn't bad, but just because it looks okay to you, does not mean it's okay to get all pissy when someone says they don't care for it, or try to give you tips on how to make it into a better piece. I don't know if it's because you don't have motivation, or if it's because you're lazy, but you should have improved FAR more in 4 months than the example you showed.Originally Posted by sKc_Chains
Last edited by Jean-Luc; February 25th, 2009 at 12:45 PM.
Hey, at least before you were attempting object shading. I don't know what the hell you're doing now. Well, ironically you chose a good name for your gallery, because you're doing just that, making scribbles to change value.
You're a self-excusing, ignorant little punk. "Art is an expression" is the biggest excuse ever. Art is an expression, but it still has rules for execution, which you blatantly ignore time and time and time again. You're not even conveying anything with your doodles. What are you expressing? What are you trying to get across? NOTHING.
So in 4 months you went from a blurry object and wasting almost the entire canvas, to... scratchy scribble objects (and blurry objects such as your brute) and wasting less, but still at least 50-75% of the canvas. Yep, looks like ignoring critique has really gotten you pretty far!
Don't kid yourself. Whenever someone brings up getting critiqued on this website, they don't ever look at their own shortcomings and they attempt to bring up rep and all kinds of irrelevant bullshit. Neg or positive rep doesn't mean shit to your art. If you even want to bring up rep, I'm the one that got you out of the hole.
You have potential to be a good artist, but all you are right now is a self-serving, ego-stroking PUNK. You lack the knowledge to create good art. Stop demonizing other people who are honest with you instead of being objective about your work and seeking out only those who will stroke your ego.
Last edited by SnaFuBAR; February 25th, 2009 at 02:14 PM.
Everyone calm down.
Chains, if you're going to flatly ignore peoples' honest suggestions then don't bother posting half-finished work. That's inviting people to comment on your style and tell you what they think would make the finished product better. A lot of people are actually putting time into showing you what they want changed, and it's just a dick thing to do if you constantly ignore them while continuing to post stuff. I already bitched at you in great length about this a few days ago, so I'll just leave this here.
Similarly, nobody else should bother putting time into helping him; he seems quite adamant about going his own way. I don't think any of us are going to be able to make him think otherwise. If he wants to live in his own bubble then let him.
Also Chains, don't whine about rep. If you hate it so much then disable it.
Last edited by teh lag; February 25th, 2009 at 02:20 PM.
If he's going to ignore the crit, shouldn't his thread be deleted? It completely goes against the point of this section of the forums.
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