Tiling's a bit noticeable. You could always just drag out a long plane just 1 unit above the area that looks the most plain. Then you could apply a really quit dirt, blood or scratch decal to make it look more interesting. Except from far away it might look a bit odd in Halo, not sure never tested it myself but it seems like a neat idea.
The banshee needs to look like it's flying, and also react to MC's added weight and swinging. The explosion sends it flying too fast, and also moves the pelican way too much. The way he's hanging off the banshee looks wrong too. In the first scene, it should instead follow alongside the banshee with MC running in the foreground. Then, he should leap out and grab the wing. Right now he would simply fall off because it's going so fast. It's unrealistic the way he boards, especially with one hand. Transition into the closeup; have him slip to one arm only. Make sure he's tilted back a bit from wind resistance, but not tilted to the side at all. here it looks like he's hanging out at an angle and it's not very convincing.
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