I translated it as:
Also, Raab sounds like he has no idea what he's talking about. Bear has his publicity mask on. Peter has his "kissass" mode on. Karen Traviss and Kevin Grace at the end are the only two that seem sort of real about what they're about. Frankie, why did you have to bring some of these cliches into Halo? Bring back Dietz and Nylund!
Also, TeeKup is right. Completely. Bear basically compiled everything he did before and copy-pasta'd into the Halo Universe. Anyone feel like writing the actual canon? You know, the actual story that fans will actually find plausible and consistent?
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