Yea I must say that my OCD of needing perfect spelling and grammar while reading this is driving me nuts right now. It seems good, content wise, but please, run it through a spell check. Then re-read it and make sure your not using "too" for "to" or "their" for "there". They make a big difference.

I've also noticed a lot of e's as well in places they shouldn't be. Like making and having.

Yay, it's English 101 in a Halo forums.