Teacher Writing Comments on my paper:
Wesley,This is a nice attempt - I am happy to see you\'ve put some thought into the assignment. However, you need to work on your writing.
Most importantly, proofread your work to avoid point deductions for spelling and grammatical errors. I cannot give full credit for an essay that contains several usages of the wrong \"there\" and spelling errors like \"them self�s\"
Also, you must format your essay properly. I need to see an introduction, three body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
In addition, you have included a great deal of content that is not common knowledge. It is alright to pull your information from the lessons or outside sources, however, you must include proper citations and bibliography. (Note: Wikipedia.org is not an acceptable source)
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Blessings
The Science Team

I'll admit i totally flunked the essay, but the (Note: Wikipedia.org is not an acceptable source) is sorta funny. I was just doing another test in my History class, and i was link to guess what, Wikipedia. I also heard it was a banned source that no one is allowed to use. (On my school site) Yet here they are using it.
About to rant to a teacher, if not the principle.
Pissed off at the moment about this.
-F.S