Quick-Crit 2008-2009

[Con]

It wasnt a shitpost, thats what it looked like :|

Didn't stop me from slapping an "unconstructive" infraction on it.

That's what it looked like :|

[Rob Oplawar]

at least it was on topic... all the posts calling it a shitpost are less on topic than the shitpost.

[/shitpost]

[Snowy]

I'm a noob at this, be nice

[NuggetWarmer]

IZ DAT SUM FRAID CHIKKINZ?

Where are the handles on the cabinets?

[rossmum]

at least it was on topic... all the posts calling it a shitpost are less on topic than the shitpost.

[/shitpost]

fyi my post was ontopic because I agreed with Snaf's crit

Also, @ Snowy - I'm no render expert so I don't have the first clue how to go about improving that, but it could definitely use work. Plus the aforementioned lack of handles. Sink looks a little impractical in terms of position, size, and shape, too.

[Anton]

Everything looks to short. I don't think I've ever met a family that short ...ever. Try scaling everything up (along the z (your height, if your using z as the height)).

Also what renderer are you using? Mental ray, Vray, scanline, other? What light sources, and do your textures have specular, bump/normal, etc?

Just questions.

D: ppl hate me.

[Corndogman]

He doesnt need handles for his cabinets, he opens them with telekinesis.

try using a higher resolution for the render, the edges need to be sharper. and remember to shot tag them.

[ExAm]

He doesnt need handles for his cabinets, he opens them with telekinesis.

try using a higher resolution for the render, the edges need to be sharper. and remember to shot tag them.

Some cabinets, and I like this, have a handle inlaid into the bottom of the door. Makes 'em look sleeker.

[Llama Juice]

That counter's corners look atrocious.

Put some thickness to them so that when a child runs by he doesn't get impaled by the counter.

[Rob Oplawar]

dammit llama, you beat me to it. I was already composing an obituary featuring the words "disemboweled by a kitchen counter"