Quick-Crit 2008-2009

[Con]

Hmm, I like that Con. How much further are you planning to go with it? I'd like to see more.

I was thinking I'd keep going with it and turn it into a full out "painting".

[Reaper Man]

Those lines in the background draw my eye to the edge of the page and not to the content.

Any suggestions on what to do with them?

[Con]

fade the ends maybe

the page would be a lot nicer with the title up top instead of taking up space on the side. A larger page could let you show higher res pictures.

[Reaper Man]

fade the ends maybe

the page would be a lot nicer with the title up top instead of taking up space on the side. A larger page could let you show higher res pictures.

The reason I made the page as such is because I want it to be functional on laptop screens, also, I plan to make it so that when one clicks on an image, it will pop up bigger (java applet).

[Hunter]

[Con]

Why is everyone making battle rifles and assault rifles and spartan lasers and spikers? There's lots of other weapons to choose from The shotgun feels left out, as does the SMG and the needler.

[Rob Oplawar]

Shotgun and needler yes, but the SMG can suck my balls.

[Hunter]

Thanks for the Crit on it anyway... *sarcasm*

And I am making it because I want to.

Edit: I wasn't going to bother posting it here, because Tweek comes's and has a childish remark. Or no one comments, they just comment on why I make it?

Just comment on the model and not what it is or why I am making it please.

[Bodzilla]

see but what your missing out on Hunter is the biggest assett in any sort of creative process is to stand out, to be different and to have a different style.
skill can only take you so far, most times it comes down to more then that, and by making the same gun as everyone else, you can just look at everyone else's crit and get the same feedback :/

it's why Dano stands out, because he put in the extra effort and challenged himself to learn new skills and be different.

[Hunter]

You are correct although as I have stated many times before, I am making all of the Halo 3 Weapons. So I will be making the same weapons that everyone else is. But I am making ALL of them.

After that I don't know what I will do, I may make custom designs or make modern weapons.