Quick-Crit 2008-2009

[Hunter]

The dead guy behind seems a bit to blurred.

[ExAm]

Looking at it again, I need to do something about the phong on that K98. Jesus Christ, it's like a mirror.

Vaguely related story: one day while the bushfires were really - and I mean really - bad, and about 10km away, the smoke was filtering the light so that there was this eerie blood-red glow cast over everything even though it was still only about 11 in the morning. It stayed like that all day, it was pretty nifty (though the sweltering heat, ashes, smoke [which starts my hayfever up pretty bad], and the fact it could easily change direction and burn my house down on a whim were kind of shitty)

I had the same thing a few months ago, during the CA wildfires.

[Hunter]

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Un-Armored:

[Malloy]

you've got the front outer armour piece the correct width that bottom of the outer armour on the handle should be...

other than that nice.

p.s top of handle looks fubar

[ExAm]

[Chainsy]

Bottom thumb is still weird, bring it in a bit closer, and the perspective on it is screwy, the nail should be more over to the left side on top, not near center.

[ExAm]

Dangit, I knew something looked weird about that nail... Further fixing the thumb itself was out of the question. The drawing's finished and it's good where it is.

[Amit]

[ExAm]

Decent, but the glow around the text seems out of place, and your name on the lower right is barely visible. Make it stand out.

[Reaper Man]

I don't see the relevance of the halo font with that image. Damn font's overused.