I left HM years ago... kinda miss it, but not sure if I'll go back or not. Not just yet, anyway.
In my opinion, the flat side looks fine, but the tall side needs a larger (wider) base and the fin needs to be taller. If you can give us a side view of it, I might be able to sketch out what I mean better than telling you. It definitely screams "I'm Forerunner!" but it doesn't have an epic quality.
Some sort of fins coming out of the rows of three little blocks by the landward side might look interesting, if you get my drift.
e/ Oh, and the landward tower (if not both) should taper in towards the front. Not drastically, but enough to notice. Check out all the stuff in Halo, the towers all taper. Snaf rages about this, it's important. I do like the shape though, I'd say it just needs those few touchups.
Last edited by rossmum; November 11th, 2008 at 12:58 AM.
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