Quick-Crit 2008-2009

[ExAm]

I'd say extend the rail the length of the top of the gun. It looks kind of out of place right now.

[BobtheGreatII]

Damn, how the hell do I manage to always get the last post... I'll edit this one with a new render of the rail extended.

[LinkandKvel]

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[ExAm]

Damn, how the hell do I manage to always get the last post... I'll edit this one with a new render of the rail extended.

Pretty cool, but what's the revolver cylinder about? It looks like you've already got an under-barrel tube magazine going there.

[SnaFuBAR]

yeah, none of the mechanics of it seem to match up.

[Heathen]

No, dont extend it.
E: nvm. It looks good actually.

[Hunter]

@ Hunter : Much of that is, to be honest, horrible. Some parts just look lie distorted primitives, when there should be a lot more shape to them. There's a lot of places where difference in detail is jarring (ex : front handle). I'd reccomend starting over with better ref, I don't think that it's worth salvaging.

Also, you don't need to cut>chamfer>extrude (or whatever you seem to be doing) all the time to get "details". In some place it just looks really bad. (Again, see handle. Also stock.) And if you *do* do that, at least try to make the smoothing clean.

@ Fear : Not bad, but not great. A lot of it looks too boxy.

I think I will completly remake it all apart from the butt. I never did think it looked right, nor did I like it lol. Thats why I never showed it.

[cheezdue]

What do you guys think I can improve on this Lego snowspeeder?
Though, Ive made some fatal mistakes on this model because I collapsed the mirror modifier on the cockpit area which cause the studs to be stuck together. I'll get the textures done when Ive find some decent ones and work on the back side of it when I have more time.

[Roostervier]

One of the pieces on the top looks like the cylinder parts are stretched.

[KiDD]

*Points down to sig*

To start with, it had was light out, and there was no snow. I tried to use particular to create a semi-halo like snow particle.