Quick-Crit 2008-2009

[Heathen]

Its already been called to attention.

[=sw=warlord]

I've seen the error myself and thought about re-rendering, i think il just remake that face and see how it looks after.
Snafubar, would you by anychance know of a way to edit the mesh so all the angles are correct?
Mass, i didn't make any insets at all, their nearly all cuts that have been extruded and the sharp edges chamfered.
most of it was plane modeled and then extruded to fit.

[SnaFuBAR]

I usually use simple geometry to check my angles, usually with cylinder divisions. I don't know if that makes sense, it's 4am.

[Mass]

You can tell when something's a 45 by the way it aliases. But Snaf is right, just make a plane and rotate it with angle-snap on to the desired angle and line 'em up.

It's not that the shape itself isn't forerunner, you've definitely got the idea down--it's just that it will look much sharper and more professional with proper angles. It has a sort of off look to it right now.

[Advancebo]

Am I the only one noticing the error in the geometry/smoothing in the center of that object?..

No

I see error :V

:V

[=sw=warlord]

You can tell when something's a 45 by the way it aliases. But Snaf is right, just make a plane and rotate it with angle-snap on to the desired angle and line 'em up.

It's not that the shape itself isn't forerunner, you've definitely got the idea down--it's just that it will look much sharper and more professional with proper angles. It has a sort of off look to it right now.

I've never actualy used snap-angles so il have to look into that thanks.
I know i have been showing various different works lately but i do hope to add them all up and put them into a single structure besides the forerunner generator [which im more than likely to use to remake the library lift].
Thanks for the comments anyways il see what i can do to further correct issues.

[Corndogman]

Angle Snaps Tutorial:
http://files.filefront.com/maniacs+a.../fileinfo.html

[Roostervier]

Anyway I can make it better?

[Geo]

I think if you emphasized the push of the clamp being taken off it would be better. Like, maybe you could show a half second of strain before it pops off, so that it doesn't just seem like its sitting on top of the rocket when he pushes it off.

[Malloy]

the fingers perforate into the mesh