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Thread: Quick-Crit 2008-2009

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    Re: The Studio Quick-Crit Thread

    yesir it was awesome


    also thought I'd show my mudbox of the head, really quick and dirty, needs more wrinkles and folds and such, but still:

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    Re: The Studio Quick-Crit Thread

    that looks so awesome

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    The lips look a little unnatural, as do the hips. It looks like she's got a really long upper lip, and there's something I just can't put my finger on about the hips area (and I'm not talking about the lack of anatomical correctness). But I assume her shame will be covered, so it may not matter.

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    Re: The Studio Quick-Crit Thread

    That render of the face looks like a younger Dhalsim from street fighter...
    Overall it's nice, but the woman looks very aged. How old is she meant to be?
    E: also, what tutorial?

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    Re: The Studio Quick-Crit Thread

    What the hell is wrong with her eyelids?!?!?

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    Re: The Studio Quick-Crit Thread

    You have to define your muscle groups and appendages better.

    The hands have to be the worse part of the mesh, they're too inaccurate. The arms appear to be one uniform size all the way through. The face needs more work, find some anatomical references to aid you in defining stronger facial structures. The eye brows also resemble a scar more than actual hair.

    Keep working at, these are only minor issues.

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    Re: The Studio Quick-Crit Thread

    good crit mech, will do that shit, thanks. I modeled the hands after my hands ( they look ok to me?) so maybe that's why they're fucked up.

    Also, one of the contributing factors to the overall suckiness is due to the fact that I didn't use any references, so I kind of shot myself in the foot with that one.

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    Re: The Studio Quick-Crit Thread

    Dayum.

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    Re: The Studio Quick-Crit Thread

    The bones on the palm look a little messed up. Most people don't have that much definition through their skin. Or at least I don't, but I'm fuckin big.

    And I was just kidding about the modeling ant texturing thing. Come on now.

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