All right, here's a piece I've been refining for a while, and I think I'm happy with how it is, for now at least. Comments, criticism, and interpretations welcome.
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Remind me how to stand again
I'm sure I can't on my own
Tracing lines you've left to find
Chasing your trail alone
Even though I feel this way
I'll believe what you say
Hopefully
Sleepwalk my way
Through your daydream
Footsteps are broken
All lead to the sea
Light splinters through
Tears in the seams
Distill memories
From these reveries
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Remind me how to stand again
I'm sure I can't on my own
Tracing lines you've left behind
Chasing your trail alone
Even though
I feel this way
I'll believe
What you say
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Treading through the fallen petals
Oceans drawing nearer
I see the wind run through the trees
But can't feel your breeze on me
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