Thanks for the encouragement... I think.Originally Posted by paladin
I'm going to listen to any suggestions by the community as I go along, I modeled it so it would be relatively easy to make changes to things still.
Anyway, I've made some improvements:
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Granted, there is still some work to do, but I'm up to the challenge.
Last edited by English Mobster; April 27th, 2009 at 08:59 PM.
I think the wraith and the warthog are much too close to each other. The explosion hole is pretty close to the wraith that fired it, and the hog would be much farther away than that.
Make the bridge broken like in chill out. Have the pieces on the floor but you can still jump across.
Oh, wow, good idea. Thanks. I'm kicking myself for not thinking of it.
Make the bridge broken like in chill out. Have the pieces on the floor but you can still jump across.
Last edited by English Mobster; April 27th, 2009 at 10:22 PM.
Too dark to see. Make some lighter renders please. And I mend no harm in what I said earlier.
New, 3x brighter renders are on their way.
Also, I'm rather proud of reproducing one of the bitmaps found in the H3: ODST concept art, considering what I had to look at was about 10 pixels by 20 pixels.
As such, I took some... Creative liberties.
(If you would like to use it for one of your own projects, go ahead, I'd be honored. But I don't think that's exactly 256x512; I extended the canvas out to 256x1024 because the texture originally was too small for one of the signs.)
I'd say that the Wraith, Warthog and exploded terrain look fine together. The window wall directly behind the Wraith, however, looks too outlandish for Human architecture.
I'm surprised no one mentioned anything about that sooner, it was one of those things I was unsure about and will probably redo. I think I just put in one window too many, tbh.
fix your smooth groups on the bsp, they look bad.
It was a quick autosmooth. Once I get the geometry done for the map and start adding in little details, it will have much better smoothing, I promise.
E: Batch renders done:
Last edited by English Mobster; April 28th, 2009 at 01:04 AM.
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