[WIP] Domain

[Sever]

Put a bunch of rubble around it then. Problem solved.

[Advancebo]

Good call. I'll move it.
Also, here's another angle of the ODST pod. The hole is (obviously) unfinished, as a ruined office will be visible in the final map.

I could edit a screenshot of the sign from the ODST trailer for that screen if you want.

[p0lar_bear]

Sever, the warthog is going to be a vehicle as it was in Turf, it's just overturned.

[English Mobster]

I could edit a screenshot of the sign from the ODST trailer for that screen if you want.

Thanks, but I like my bitmap.

[Rob Oplawar]

I'm sorry, but, wtf is this shit?
The nicest way I can say this is, this area needs to be completely redone.

[n00b1n8R]

I don't mind the angular supports, but I agree with the rest (I get you need something to replace those toy buses from the original turf, but that looks completely random).

The bridges were dumb in the original turf though, not much reason to come up with an excuse for them (I assume that's what rob's getting at when he circled the base of one).

[English Mobster]

Oh, is that why you circled the base of the bridge? The bridge doesn't have much purpose, you're right, but it looks nice, IMO.

[Malloy]

The bridge looks out of place as im taking it that the 'shops' ,are metal and, arent concrete and yet the bridge looks like it has shattered and broken like concrete with its support foundation rod thingies spoking out. Also the bridge doesnt have any viable supports, rather unbelievable thus will stick out imo.

Also what is with some of these random angles.

Location#1: the place which is labelled "Where's the issue here?" the angles look totally different and non adjacent to the supports.

Location#2: You have labelled it 'fixed', so maybe that angle is edited I dont know, but it looks out of place and sticks out like a sore thumb.

Location#3: That 'Janitor' advert/warning sign in that gnarly non rectangular extrusion.


Yeh I just woke up so half my shit might not make sense, but basically clear up wierd angles and make things look viable (bridge supports, balh blah) try and make it seamless to the eye architectuarly (if that is a word).

[English Mobster]

The bridge looks out of place as im taking it that the 'shops' ,are metal and, arent concrete and yet the bridge looks like it has shattered and broken like concrete with its support foundation rod thingies spoking out. Also the bridge doesnt have any viable supports, rather unbelievable thus will stick out imo.

Also what is with some of these random angles.

Location#1: the place which is labelled "Where's the issue here?" the angles look totally different and non adjacent to the supports.

Location#2: You have labelled it 'fixed', so maybe that angle is edited I dont know, but it looks out of place and sticks out like a sore thumb.

Location#3: That 'Janitor' advert/warning sign in that gnarly non rectangular extrusion.


Yeh I just woke up so half my shit might not make sense, but basically clear up wierd angles and make things look viable (bridge supports, balh blah) try and make it seamless to the eye architectuarly (if that is a word).

Maybe a zoomed-out view of the area will show that those supports all have equal angles relative to one another.

While some of the buildings are metal, others are concrete. That particular bridge is joining a metal structure with a concrete one, and thus it is concrete. When it was together, it didn't need any supports underneath it, as it was strong enough to hold its own weight.

[Malloy]

well to be honest, the Turf shops are metal, you cant really chose whether they're concrete or not, that'l just look dumb imo.