can you also deliver a picture of the revised MC holding the assault rifle? along with a side-by-side comparison? This would help.
1. Enlongate the the chin/mouth a little. Leave a dent between the breathing piece and the mouth piece like the original. you're giving it a more front facial structure of human, not helmet. It's a nice touch though, can be admirable.
2. The visor has already been mentioned, but I have a suggestion. Maybe add those nice curvatury lines to it like in Halo 2? and take away the black all together. I really enjoy that creative visor design, though. So I don't think you should change that.
3. The shades on the top of the helmet should stay their original black color, thin out a little, and potrude a slightly bit more? or should be revamped in design all together, the shine was nice, but not a necessary feature for the structure you left it in.
4. That long line that starts at the forehead and ends in the back. What the hell? I think it adds a bitt too much complexity to the helmet altogether. Something needs to be done or that thing should go...
Other than this, I'd like to see what's coming up with your re-worked model. Everything else is looking amazing so far.
EDIT: Also, it'd be nice to know you read this and atleast gave my ideas some acknowledgement/consideration for my consideration in trying to help you with your work.
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