Quick-Crit 2008-2009

[Llama Juice]

20 minutes or so, I don't know where I'm going to go with it.

You're going to extrudy land for a walk down bevel street.

More =/ better. Think of a single red dot in the center of a page, then think of a page full of red dots, all systematically arranged and perfect... which one is more interesting to look at? The single red dot.

Your model there is polka dots.

[ICEE]

Not putting this one in my gallery yet because i've only done this anim and it isn't finished, but crit me please

(its a gif so im spoilering because its polite)

[FluffyDucky™]

I like how it throws it. Very nice.

[CSFLOYD]

http://img269.imageshack.us/i/mbox1.jpg/
http://img32.imageshack.us/i/mbox2.jpg/
model, unwrap and texture made by me today in like 30 mins.
It is a halo mystery box for those who dont know, since I will have a script coming up shortly I figured why not? Post and tell me where I can improve on this model.
Thanks.

[Heathen]

Not putting this one in my gallery yet because i've only done this anim and it isn't finished, but crit me please

(its a gif so im spoilering because its polite)

Dont like the throw. Looks like he slaps it off. And the way it snaps back into position like his arms were mechanical looks wonky.

box

I was so hoping thats what it was.

[rossmum]

That's not how you reload a Sten. It fires from an open bolt, same as virtually every WWII submachine gun; the Sten was basically a British MP40, so they operated in largely the same manner. The bolt was pulled back and locked in the little safety notch, the mag was changed, and it was released from the notch. The bolt would then lock in the open position until the trigger was pulled.

[rossmum]

So I did. Fixed it now, thanks for calling it out though

[Heathen]

So I did. Fixed it now, thanks for calling it out though

No problem

[ICEE]

Wow that would have been really helpful beforehand. Oh well, I'll just call this one a portfolio piece. If i redo it later, Will repost.

[Pooky]

Wow that would have been really helpful beforehand. Oh well, I'll just call this one a portfolio piece. If i redo it later, Will repost.

Hey, you're far from the first one to fuck up a WWII gun reload animation. In World at War at least 70% of all the animations are somehow wrong :|