Should've had it focus on the bird at least D: I can imagine it would look nice, but a real thing would be cool.

There are some things to work on. Some of the angles you chose are...odd, like the phones. Perhaps you could try getting a shot of the phone taking up the entire frame.

I'll let Reaper take you on, so I don't sound like a total jackwad.

The rocket hummer was cool though =D