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    Re: The Studio Quick-Crit Thread

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    Re: The Studio Quick-Crit Thread



    Another shot. I think I've got the major details and proportions nailed. Just have to do the small things now. Then move down to the neck and so forth.

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    Re: The Studio Quick-Crit Thread


    Another shot at the train station.
    I've tried to make it less cardboard-y by taking out a massive chunk of the roof.
    Also, I was thinking back to the Domain betas way back when and remembered how a single entrance to any structure is bad news when it comes to Oddball camping. As such, I added in a tiny hole near the base of the Train Station which leads into the station itself.
    While it's not readily apparent in the render, there IS some rebar supporting that tiny hole, the render's just at a bad angle.
    Personally, I don't like the hole, but I have to have at least 2 entrances to preserve gameplay, and I can't think of any way to make it look good.
    So I'm looking for your guys' opinion on both if I had succeeded in making it any better and how I can make that hole look nicer.

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    Re: The Studio Quick-Crit Thread

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    It's hard to tell without it being properly textured, but it looks good to me.

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    Re: The Studio Quick-Crit Thread

    While I'm at it, I have one more picture I would like crit on:

    Since I'm constantly changing things here, the UVWs are temporary, as usual.

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    Re: The Studio Quick-Crit Thread


    derek.pepness.net/images/SuperIntendent.psd
    .psd with the vector objects and such at 1024x1024 if anyone wants it.

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    Re: The Studio Quick-Crit Thread

    HEy, I have buttons with those on them.

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    Re: The Studio Quick-Crit Thread


    Slowly working my way down.

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    Re: The Studio Quick-Crit Thread

    your neck muscle anatomy is bad.

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    Re: The Studio Quick-Crit Thread

    Agreed. You've got your musculature going more diagonally than vertically, as seen in the reference, along with how it works in reality.

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