I'm going to be perfectly honest with you; this whole map was looking okay until I saw that comparison image. I know you weren't going for a direct 1:1 recreation of that environment in the ODST concept art, but yours is very, very inaccurate and truth be told, if you hadn't shown me the concept art as a base, I probably never would have realized that's what I was looking at. The biggest problem you seem to have with it is the scaling. In the concept art, there is a sense of grandeur, a sense of something large scale. Yours evokes both a sense of amateurism, and a feeling of claustrophobia. If you're interested, I'd have no problem taking that concept art and adding approximate dimensions to it to help you achieve a more accurate re-creation of it.









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