Mr.big they are right, I am wrong, your composition is perfect and the feild of depth and lighting are all defined!!! Your specular is correct to the varying materials so it doesn't all look like random brush strokes!!! I do not compare to your skill!!
Please do not try to start a fight.
I'm not saying it is perfect. I am not trying to be perfect.
I don't want to fight. I want you to ignore those kids over there and take my crit. You see, you're approaching it like texturing, and that is about all the experience, maybe not even that, that those guys have. In their perspective, it looks good, but that is a narrow minded, ignorant perspective. I am not calling said people stupid, they have great amounts of skill in other areas, but please dont fuck up this kid when yall have no clue what you are talking about. Now big, as said in the pm, it is up to you, I am done, my opinion and crit was said, take it as you want.
Also big if you have doubts, go to my gallery.
His painting looks better than any painting I've seen from youOriginally Posted by sKc_Chains
Yea, I guess yall are right I will stop giving crit that will make him as bad of an artist as me
Edit- lol disaster you trole
Last edited by Chainsy; October 10th, 2009 at 09:26 PM.
MrBig, read Chains crit and have a go at implying some of his techniques. His whining is pissing me off.
MyOur comment seems to have fucked up your whole life!! Oh the drama!
Damn...
(According to chains...)
I don't even care that you insulted me in that, I am just happy that big might actually take it into consideration what I said and try to improve!!! This actaully brightened my day so much.
Mr.Big wants to be just like you when he grows up.
@ Mr. Big
pointless bickering aside, I have this advice for you:
Work on your field of depth. I am not really the guy to give criticism for this kind of work, so take it in stride, but the illusion of depth is really lacking in this piece. I think this may be because of the balance of detail. Theres a lot of it, and not necessarily where it needs to be. The background seems just as detailed as the foreground, which to my eye is somewhat distracting.
What is the focus? It looks to me like it would be the tree that you haven't finished, but i can't really tell.
I also (and this is really a foremost issue) recommend getting virtually everything in place on a basic level before you start doing the detailing. Helps put things in perspective.
Overall I like your Artistic style. Its better than what I could do.
And a little advice for surviving on modacity...
90% of the people who use this forum are in some kind of feud with someone else here. Almost every single one is against chains in one way or another, and so they frequently do gang up on him. While he often does deserve it, that doesn't mean his criticism is completely null. for the most part, I agree with what he told you in his first post, as he did go through the exact same thing when he started here. Just don't get caught up in the drama and take everything in stride
Pretty much just wanted to see what I'd end up with if I was modelling a banshee pad similar to this one
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