Well it looks true to the H3 map that he's copying from, so in that sense it looks pretty good.
Well it looks true to the H3 map that he's copying from, so in that sense it looks pretty good.
Okay this is pretty much done for now, I started on it months ago and finally got around to finishing it. It's meant to be a humanoid alien, hence the weird ears:
What do you guys think of the way I did the ears, yay/nay? Also, I gotta go redo the lips because they look terrible. It's also supposed to have horns, but i'm not sure yet how/if i'll do those. (he's based off a character in the book Contest by Matt Reilly.) I've already unwrapped it, and he'll probably turn into a full biped at some point.
(also, Heathen i'm waiting for you to tell me it looks creepy... again)
The ears need to stick out. Right now it just looked like someone carved the shape of an ear into the side of his head.
Yeah... I'm guessing you didn't read what I wrote.
A Mental Patient's Anecdote
My walls are padded, my doors: locked.
My windows non-existent.
Constantly I cry myself to sleep
Wrapped in fabric, mind gone deep
And yet, I look upon the wall
And there I see your face
In patches dark upon the yellow,
How it makes me feel so mellow
That caretaker of the institution
How he keeps me here.
He sees me as a lesser being,
so he keeps me, never seeing
What life is like outside my doors.
e: removed trailing ellipses for Nugget
Last edited by klange; November 13th, 2009 at 10:58 PM.
get rid of all of the "..."
just have the lines end with no punctuation, unless it's the end of a sentence.
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