Quick-Crit 2008-2009

[MetKiller Joe]

It is too smooth and quick; the time between taking out the magazine and putting a fresh one in needs to be longer. The finger movement is interesting, but a little too jerky.

[ICEE]

Not to use that as an excuse, but I think the process of turning it into a gif speeds it up a bit. Or maybe its the browser, because it does seem faster than the original AVI. But I do agree with you about the fingers.

edit: having compared the gif to the avi side by side, it has become very evident that the gif is about 4/3 the speed of the avi. Replaced the gif with the avi.

EE: it still doesnt play very well because photobucket is shit. Putting the gif back. Just keep in mind that its a bit faster than it should be.

[ExAm]

you're having him flick the slide release before the magazine is even set. Flick it after the magazine is all the way in, and make the slide click back at least three times as fast as it does in your image.

[ICEE]

oh I thought that was a mag release.

[Con]

You can see through the bottom of the slide when the gun tilts to its side, adjust the angle or model the bottom of the slide.

[PenGuin1362]

The magazine release is a button behind the base of the trigger guard.

[Hunter]

Unwrapping, nearly done.

[teh lag]

What am I looking at there and what am I supposed to be giving crit on?

I'd like to point out that this is the quick-crit thread. If you just want to give an update on a project of yours, do so elsewhere.

[Hunter]

Was going to post an unwrap template as well, sorry. Forgot, I will post one in a bit.

[Cagerrin]

What... What have you done to the Vector

Ruined it? Actually I didn't know what it was supposed to look like, original concept was made in PMG without presets, so I was just sticking parts together.