Quick-Crit 2008-2009

[Hunter]

That looks decent. Wire frame?

[Spartan094]

i need to finish dis bitch

First I don't model but those look wrong to me, I know your not done with some other parts which is why I didn't circle them. Magazine look abit to blocky and sharp on the edges and seems to pushed in and should be more curved, could add more poly's to the barrel in FP, if thats a clay render something is wrong with the smoothing on the stock. You know the rest. But yeah it looks really nice thou.

[n00ber]

its a bout 2318 tris faggotinoswithburritos

[legionaire45]

Back of your lower receiver is wrong. There are a couple of styles depending on who you get your lower receiver from, but all the ones I have seen look something like these:

[n00ber]

Back of your lower receiver is wrong. There are a couple of styles depending on who you get your lower receiver from, but all the ones I have seen look something like these:

heh yea sorry bout that, i couldnt see the reciever very well from that ref that i was using

[Roostervier]

you should probably use multiple refs when modeling

[n00ber]

you should probably use multiple refs when modeling

i probably should, but im too lazy to look up a bunch of refs on google image . anywaay

i need to animate dis bitch

i need to unwrap dis bitch

[neuro]

your entire gun is so lowpoly, and then you come with a 30-sided barrel.

kinda defeats the purpose of it all, doens't it?

[Spartan094]

i probably should, but im too lazy to look up a bunch of refs on google image

http://lmgtfy.com/?q=M16


Don't forget to finish the right side.
I acutaly ment to put the "30-sided barrel" that neuro is talking about in FP not 3p since he said it looks really low poly and such. Try to do a 3p model first then FP. Might be easier for you I think.

[kid908]

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It's been a while since I submitted anything. C&C.