Quick-Crit 2010

[ODX]

A quick shotgun firing I made for the hell of it:

[t3h m00kz]

Looks decent but I'm not liking the return to origins.

[Roostervier]

it looks very rigid and jumpy. try and smooth it out some

[n00ber]

and




basicly finished, got to finish some small details and fix some stuff up

[t3h m00kz]

I'd say add another edge around the front handle, make it a bit less jagged.

[EX12693]

The inside edge of the mag also doesn't look right. Smoothe that out too...

[p0lar_bear]

The whole magazine could use a redo; it just looks wrong.

[annihilation]

Add some detail to the grip aswell.
Fix the rails too. They're uneven.

[SnaFuBAR]

Basically finished? How many reference are you working with? Just about every detail is wrong or exaggerated.

[n00ber]

like this?

Fix the rails too. They're uneven.

how so? they uneven between rails or height?

EDIT: i used bout 4 or 5 refs