A project I did in Comp. Art and Design 1 at my school. It was just using a silhouette in the picture.
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A project I did in Comp. Art and Design 1 at my school. It was just using a silhouette in the picture.
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Digital Media Flash project
First time using flash, like, ever. I'm sure I fucked something up.
Last edited by ExAm; November 1st, 2010 at 03:01 AM.
The fact that the horizon line is still there when he's falling.
if the horizon line wasn't there, he'd be underground. The only thing that bothers me about it is the fact that he jumps headfirst but lands in the opposite position. Other than that, love it. Made me smile
He lands on his face, his body arches over forward and flops down. That's how I drew it, anyway. Kind of hard to discern at a high FPS.
if you slowed that part down a bit, gave it more emphasis it might just add to the magic.
The apparent angle at which he falls and the angle the letters fly out of his mouth as he falls don't match; it looks like he's swooping down, but really, he's just falling.
Also, maybe you should exaggerate the level of the horizon a bit, and have it down a bit lower for the guy on the cliff, then raise it up some as he falls.
@Sever: way too close man; that's uncomfortably close.
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