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    Re: [GALLERY]Mech's Beats

    Although I applaud your efforts, there is still a lot you need to work on before you can get something which sounds marginally good.
    I'm not going to bother to comment on the "hip hop beats" because of how simplistic the nature of their production is (besides a vast majority of hip hop being garbage). However i'll go ahead and give you some constructive criticism on your trance song.
    1) From what I can tell you're just using synth presets for all your instruments in the song, don't do that, learn to program synths so you can get more dynamic sounds out of them, its like downloading models off turbosquid without actually knowing how to model.
    2) At the 1:00 mark you seem to have too much going on, besides that some of the notes seem to be out of key.
    3) Your mastering is horrible, the bass is all over the place, there is not clear distinction between the synths and the drums. An easy fix to this is to learn how to side chain, but besides that learn how to EQ.
    4) It's very repetitive, change it up (don't justify this by saying that trance is repetitive, this argument is inherently flawed)
    5) If your goal was to do trance, never do break beat drum progressions, keep it simple, 4 on the floor.

    Also if you have a limiter on your master, get rid of it.
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    Re: [GALLERY]Mech's Beats

    The song keep on had 1 preset, the choir voice and the main lead has an echo on it. I made the rest manually. Thanks for the feedback, I have a couple more songs in the works and would enjoy your feedback again.

    As far as songs go I officially started my first "album" with Keep on, so ignore the rest of the stuff as it was more for practice and getting to know the program.


    Also, DUCKY <3 ! If there was one internet dude I'd love to hang out with in RL, it'd be you.
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    Re: [GALLERY]Mech's Beats

    Fuck you made me smile.. How can I contact you besides this forum? Facebook? Anything D: ?! <3333333
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    Re: [GALLERY]Mech's Beats

    Nice try the style I said
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    Re: [GALLERY]Mech's Beats

    Thats epic man!
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    Re: [GALLERY]Mech's Beats

    hey, so I dedicated a good half a year of my life to music and hEARS(GET IT?) what I got.

    Some rap beats and some ruff draft trance stuff.

    My old music was GARBAGE.

    Well anywho. This is a whole set of music I made.

    https://soundcloud.com/trapmann/sets/trapman

    Enjoy
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    Re: [GALLERY]Mech's Beats

    It's set to private.
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    Re: [GALLERY]Mech's Beats

    https://soundcloud.com/trapmann/bumpin

    This should work. It's one of my songs.
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    Re: [GALLERY]Mech's Beats

    Click the "share" button, use the secret link.
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    Re: [GALLERY]Mech's Beats

    Sorry! We can’t find that

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