Quote Originally Posted by ExAm View Post
My advice, don't use an intro longer than about 2-3 seconds. People can already see whose channel they're on, and it's just more clutter before the meat of the video. People have short attention spans.

Regarding the design, it's a bit too flashy and busy for what it is. Keep it simple, easy on the eyes. Go for interesting and readable, not cool for the sake of cool. Simple forms. Simple color scheme. This is something to be viewed quickly, not closely inspected. Also, the lens flare on the upper left draws the eye up there the second it sees it. There's nothing up there but that flare, and it's visually confusing. The eye should be drawn to your logo, not some random lens flare.
Thanks for the critique. =) I was planning on making a second version since this was mainly spawned from experimentation. Sure, I'll make it less flashy, but the Revenant stays. >=)