Skiiran, Warsaw, Emzee, Rob: all aboard the bandwagon!

[Leiukemia]

Holy shit, go write a fucking sci-fi book, lol.

[Texrat]

I thought the house was the narator (some kind of robotic house).

that was interesting in a really good way rob. I'd send that to some publishing magazine to get their coments.

Feh. Who wants comments? They don't pay any bills. He'd be better off submitting for consideration of publication.

[Rob Oplawar]

I thought the house was the narator (some kind of robotic house).

Yeah, not to put too fine a point of it because it's kind of the purpose of the story to be subtle about it, but the narrator is the AI built into the house.

[Texrat]

Yeah, not to put too fine a point of it because it's kind of the purpose of the story to be subtle about it, but the narrator is the AI built into the house.

I'd have to become an arsonist really fast.

[n00b1n8R]

Feh. Who wants comments? They don't pay any bills. He'd be better off submitting for consideration of publication.

I said a publishing magazine didn't I? one for short storys like that. I thought that he'd also be able to get some professional critique (spelling?) on it too.