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    Re: Gallery Topic (post your favorite work, or WIP's)

    It doesn't feel too uncomfortable if you do it out. Though it is a bit weird since you normally wouldn't do that.

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    Re: Gallery Topic (post your favorite work, or WIP's)

    Quote Originally Posted by FlamingRain View Post
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    Bugs to fix:

    1 - No bolt on fire

    2 - Melee needs a shitload of work

    3 - Bad thumb/finger placement on reload
    Very nice, and a giant leap past your previous works. It needs minor, minor adjustments, but it's pretty awesome besides that.

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    Re: Gallery Topic (post your favorite work, or WIP's)

    You're getting much better.

    However, I would like to see his fingers have more movement and a more natural position, his thumb looked awkward. His grenade hand, make it so it looks like he's holding an actual grenade, right now it looks like his hand is just flat and waving to someone. I actually like the concept behind your reload, I say keep it. As for the melee, just speed it up a bit and it will look fine.

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    Re: Gallery Topic (post your favorite work, or WIP's)

    guns don't recoil like that.

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    Re: Gallery Topic (post your favorite work, or WIP's)

    Your reload click back in is completely off BTW.

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    Re: Gallery Topic (post your favorite work, or WIP's)

    Grenade throw is too fast. There needs to be more time between when you draw back the gun and when the throw actually happens; as if he's going for a grenade on his belt.

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    Re: Gallery Topic (post your favorite work, or WIP's)

    - Melee doesn't seem powerful at all, and the part returning to the normal pose looks really odd.

    - Recoil is just not right.

    - On the reload, it looks like the left hand's fingers go a bit weird at the end.

    - Reload itsself seems a bit "soft," though that's just a style thing I suppose.

    -Nade throw, like p0lar said, needs some time before the hand comes down and "throws."

    And now, time to whore my elites. I'm still not overly happy with the feet. Suggestions on how to make them better, anyone D:?




    Also, heretics-ish. The torso lights looked better in 3ds than they do in this render .


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    Re: Gallery Topic (post your favorite work, or WIP's)

    Quote Originally Posted by teh lag View Post
    And now, time to whore my elites. I'm still not overly happy with the feet. Suggestions on how to make them better, anyone D:?

    http://halo.wikia.com/wiki/Elites_%28Sangheili%29

    If you use this link, scroll down to Rank Structure and keep going until you find Elite Ultra and Elite Major. From what I see, if you're going for the Halo 3 look, the feet aren't as fat as I see them in your model, and the space between the toes is bigger. Think of the Halo 2 feet, only they stand on their entire foot and not on their toes. I'm also guessing that ball on their heels is used for balance.

    EDIT: I didn't mean they stand on their toes, it just looked like it at first. They do stand on their entire foot in H2, but the H3 feet are flatter.

    In the Elite Major picture, look at his right foot (The one that's pointed at the screen) and you'll see what I mean.

    Thats my two cents. Merry Christmas.
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    Re: Gallery Topic (post your favorite work, or WIP's)

    Needz moar R'tas 'Vadum. I hate how whoever makes the Halo action figures canceled his model, just because he would've been "just another elite". I would've bought it...

    Anyways, less armor on the feet. Show some more hoof.

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    Re: Gallery Topic (post your favorite work, or WIP's)

    Quote Originally Posted by teh lag View Post
    - Melee doesn't seem powerful at all, and the part returning to the normal pose looks really odd.

    - Recoil is just not right.

    - On the reload, it looks like the left hand's fingers go a bit weird at the end.

    - Reload itsself seems a bit "soft," though that's just a style thing I suppose.

    -Nade throw, like p0lar said, needs some time before the hand comes down and "throws."

    And now, time to whore my elites. I'm still not overly happy with the feet. Suggestions on how to make them better, anyone D:?

    He's leaning over a little bit too much, he needs to stand straighter for the next render. Also, the feet are still too big.
    Quote Originally Posted by teh lag View Post
    Also, heretics-ish. The torso lights looked better in 3ds than they do in this render .

    The cylinders on the shoulder either to be smaller and with more detail, or they need to go. His face makes him look like the retard of the Elite ranks. And his feet look like they would connect to a Lego Block.

    But other then that, nice models.

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