too many black lines, especially on the shoulder pad. they aren't hard edges, and the colour doesn't change, so perhaps a different colour?

also, I don't like the elbow joint either, the grooves need work or re-colouring or something.

oh, and the AR looks wrong. (and the knee caps look weird, and the groin plate is grey, and the helmet looks too pointy, and the wrist positioning looks rather uncomfortable, and I'm sure the back of his helmet doesn't cave in like that..)

all in all, it's just nowhere near as good as your strider :/