1. His motions look far too effortless and smooth. Particularly when he removes and replaces the fuel tank. Make the motions "snap" a bit.
2. Barring that he's some cybernetic freak, the way he holds the the weapon from the point where the removes the fuel tank to when he replaces it looks really awkward, as the distribution of the weight of the weapon is extremely unbalanced.
3. The finger positioning really makes my eyes bleed, but since you are using the h1 rig, which has terrible fingers, I'll let you slide on that one.
4. There are some points in the animation where the weapon just basically "floats", making it look unnatural.
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