Well, for one I'd get rid of most of the lights. The lighting seems rather bland at the moment, try to mix it up with some different Colours and Shades. Try to dot the lights around the map, to give more atmosphere/effect. Remember, In some cases Less is More.
The building's style seems very inconsistent.
The light placement seems random.
the terrain textures are tiled really bad.
It looks more like 2k4 than ut3.
All of it just basicaly looks odd.
Disaster, I want to see that Spit fixed according to the refs I gave you, and I'd like some closer renders so I can see if there's anything else aside from the proportions, the windscreen/canopy and the exhaust pipes (on the skin). If you need anything further, just ask - I also recall from memory almost every panel joint on the fuselage, not hard to tell it's my favourite plane. That's an RAAF one, by the way :P
Anyway,
I KNOW IT'S DARK
It's very grey. Reminds me of stone.Originally Posted by Invader Veex
Bungie's model and UVs, my skin and lame render
since, i have changed things, like the lights on the things in the front where the plasma bolt comes from.
Made this last Friday.
I can't see crap, make it brighter. It's way too dark.
end yourself
Well if you want any critique on the subject then it does need to be brighter. I'm not even sure what you posted it for though, because you keep posting images like this without saying what you want crit on. I'm not sure if you even want crit or are just posting your work. Like we just went through, this is a crit thread not a gallery.
I want crit on something other than how fucked up peoples' monitors are. I have my brightness turned right down and I can still see it fine. It's supposed to be night, night is bloody dark, end of story. I'm not making it look like high noon on my screen just because someone else's monitor is hosed.
You sure gave rossmum a reality check, way to go!.
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