Quite nice, I like your interpretation of the Beam Rifle.
I know you only spent an hour on it, but if you were to continue it, I would suggest making the rocks uniformly detailed, lessen the sharpening, and make the Beam Rifle just slightly longer.
Getting very good chains. You should finish that and add some trees and more forest behind.
I say add some terrain, with a small stream cutting across the middle, and a forerunner tower behind that, off to the top left. Then add some more battle stuff going on, just don't over complicate it.
Eh, Dane is probably right, I pretty much do suck. But since he gave no crit whatsoever, I can not improve on whatever he doesn't like, so I am going to keep painting my own way, sorry brah.
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