some thoughts, your proportions and angles are right, but I think you need to work with your lines more.
those ribs need to finish their horizontal lines or they'll stay looking awkward
The way that the 45 degree pillar meets the ground is unsatisfying and looks incomplete
the top is a box and should probably come in at a 60 degree angle (as I drew it.)
The thing I put on top is definitely not necessary, but please let your lines finish themselves more gracefully.
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