Nice stuff Rooster.
E/ Never mind, didn't read that you rendered in another program..
Nice stuff Rooster.
E/ Never mind, didn't read that you rendered in another program..
I really like those, good job! There's nothing I can really point out that stands out as wrong or needing improvement. I'd like to see them with some colors other than yellow - in fact, you could probably use them for bases in team games...
I never thought about that, actually. I only used yellow twice because I wanted to be able to use them in the same environment. I'll make a CC map for them.
I still made all the content, what's wrong with rendering it in marmoset?Originally Posted by Newbkilla
Veeerry nice
Nothing is wrong, I just wondered how you rendered it like that, then I re-read it, and it answered my6 question.I never thought about that, actually. I only used yellow twice because I wanted to be able to use them in the same environment. I'll make a CC map for them.
I still made all the content, what's wrong with rendering it in marmoset?
uh, some random shit i was suggested to post. ill probably find more, a lot of it is unfinished, some isn't really my work other than putting pieces together and i thought it looked cool. im also aware alot of it could look a lot better
skin on ^^ this is horrid, made it a long time ago
none of the stuff on this ^^ is mine, its ripped from h3 or downloaded from somewhere and i was just messing around in the editor
Hey, show us the parts of the building. Nobody posts stuff like that here. I'm really curious to see how it was made.
The machine gun: I think I told you when you first showed me, but the front grip seems waaay to tall. Otherwise I'd say it's pretty solid - I suppose it could use bit more flair in some places, but then again I don't really have the knowledge to give you any serious crit on it beyond my gut feeling. I would have spiced up the magazine a bit with some indentations or labels or something.
I absolutely love the AR-ish thing, with the exception of the top bit. I would have added some up-down tapering to it to add a little more variety... too late for that now though. The trigger area looks like it could use some cleanup compared with the quality level you've got on the rest of it.
On both of those it kinda looks like you hit a point where you ran out of steam and just wanted to finish it; I'm not sure if that's actually what happened but some parts have noticeable drops in detail/visual style compared to the rest of the piece.
Last edited by teh lag; April 19th, 2010 at 07:35 PM.
double drum mag seems too... simple, geometry-wise, compared to the rest of the mg.
AR seems almost like a bizarre mating of forerunner and human. don't really like the sight design, but that's just me.
yeah the mag was p rushed on the mg and my tablet wasnt working. probably going to reskin. also, the ar thing is taper at the top some, only its tapered at about 5 degrees so its too subtle.
this is very wip, haven't gotten too detailed with it either yet
it's an elite that austin had a concept of... it's intentionally bony.
note i haven't even touched the head yet and i have done nearly nothing to the neck up there, and i haven't really touched the feet either.
also note i'm going to kind of touch-up/really change some parts of the middle of the torso. and the hands need work too.
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