[WIP] Halo Shotgun

[paladin]

The handle looks too small.

[Hunter]

I plane modelled it. And yeah, looks like Halo 3 Shotgun atm. Maing it more custom wgen I have a decent basic shape.

I will work on the pump and the grip area needs seriouse work.

[Hunter]

30/08/2009;



What can I do with the pump Snaf? And can anyone thing of ways to make it look better. And please don't tell me to change the sights too much, I like them Lol. That is the first custom thing I have ever done. Btw, I think I will put a red cross in the middle of the sight like the ODST SMG has.

4,040 Triangles. Parts can still be optimized though.

[ODX]

I'd suggest doing something like a Spas12 pump, where it's not completely even underneath:

[Hunter]

I can't see that looking good with the design of the halo shotgun.

[Roostervier]

the pump isnt the only thing you have to worry about. the gun looks okayish in 3p save for the pump, but in fp it looks terrible. especially the loading port and back end of the receiver (not sure if thats the right term) that comes before the stock.

[ODX]

I can't see that looking good with the design of the halo shotgun.

I suggested the general shape, not the actual pump itself.

[Hunter]

Didnt really work on the back end because you won't see it much, but I could do with adding afew polies in near the "loading port?" because of the siloutte.

[teh lag]

The transition from the gun to the stock is... not ok. You can do better than that. Maybe the lighting is making it look worse than it actually is; I think you need to clean up that area and make the transition smoother though.

[Hunter]

Instead of one thick bar going through the stock and the main gun, how about having 2 bars, and the stock a bit further back, and maybe the stock being a tad bit smaller?